All Comments on 'Life Between Day and Night'
by podga
- 30 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI would love for you to explore and expound on this couple. The newness and uncertainty of mature love is... It's like your writing amazing, fresh and rewarding. More of both please ;o)
lill_street_writerabout 13 years agoLove it. Short, sweet and incredibly real. Thank you for your talents and energies.
npicciniabout 13 years ago...as always! So happy to see a new story from you, we've missed you!
Anonymousabout 13 years ago...and today is no different. I love your writing style and characters! I look forward to reading whatever you dream up in the (hopefully near) future.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoDear #podga#, are you going to continue this story? It has a good potential of becoming a novell, an exellent novell !!!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoA good start but what happens? Do they continue to just hook up or is it a relationship that starts. It feels unfinished. I'd like to see the rest personally.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI am rereading all your stories as a birthday present to myself but there is just not enough of them. I love your characters and their worlds and your style is fantastic but this story in particular feels unfinished. Please come back
modernreaderalmost 12 years agoPlease write more about these characters. I really like your other stories.
TimothyMalmost 12 years agoThis story ended far too soon, I'm aching to know how their relationship developped. But intense, sexy and tenderly humorous as always.
CMfromSwedenalmost 12 years agoI like this story. I read it a few months ago but I had to re-read it again today. I agree with others who have made comments to this, it feels unfinished. It's a great beginning - I like that they are working together and one of them is "boss", whould like to know what kind of work they do. There is something with this story, can't explain what - that draws me back to it. Enough of my babbling now :)
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Anonymousalmost 12 years agomysealtheeclipse read podgas biography, pretty sure its not gonna be another chapter - unfortunately..
/ very anonymous this time !!
SadieRoseover 11 years agoIt needs no expansion nor explanation. Will is his boss. What they do is there in the story, hard-bitten city cops; the talk of discussing cases and what happens "back at the station" tell us this. The need for secrecy in their day to day lives means that maybe the romance won't flourish, but then, maybe it will.
A lovely snapshot of a moment in time, beautifully etched in strong, simple, powerful words. That will do.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoalmost pointlessly cute (that's a good thing) so simple and clean and exactly like the beginning of an actual real relationship, it's so nice to find something this simple and sweet here.
LadyRazaabout 10 years agoI read what you wrote about this in your bio and I agree that it's great as a "snapshot". Sometimes open-ended things irritate me, but for some reason in this case it just seems right.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agothe ending is as ambiguous as his last words, but I like to read between the lines that there is definitely going to be more with their relationship, this is not the end for them.
short and sweet. Didn't know if they were both straight or just gay for each other, didn't need spelling out though, love is the person not the gender , liked it
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe intensity and eroticism of the narration is remarkable. I agree with you that the score is pretty good for a story with this level of intercourse. However, as of the time of writing this, it is the only one of your stories not to be scored 4.5 or higher. This tells me that your fans would like to see more of Will and Nick. They want more of your fine writing, and I agree with them wholeheartedly.
