All Comments on 'Life Model'

Nicely written, loved the emotion and the way it progressed . It has a feel that is wonderful. Thank you.

good stuff. 5*

Nothing extraordinary, but well done. You might want to check a couple of typos, but overall quite acceptable.

Thanks for the effort.

Please continue this modeling relationship with poses :)

nice work, well done too bad it didn't have pictures to go with the story. 5 stars :)

... I could see this being a great romance, because accidental seduction is every bit as good as the real thing. I see that it's your first submission, so if it really is your first work, congratulations on a job well done. Highly enjoyable read, and looking forward to more.

A really vivid and erotic story.

I hope you keep writing, this had me wet and wanting more!

Thank you!

Simply amazing - it might seem arrogant to say I felt like I was reading words I wrote but it is not - it simply resonates. Just astonishing...and why am I reading this? Because I found the link after an innocent PM about similar journeys...now I am wondering about a certain name...Jill? He smiles.

I just found you, and do enjoy your writing that stands proud of the far too common gutter/ghetto talk.

5*

Thanks again, Oleguy, you're very kind.

enjoy it thanx

stumbled upon your story. just wow. would love to be your life model