All Comments on 'Life Next Ch. 01'

This is an erotic site, and for a story so devoid of present sex, I was floored by the tension between the characters. You didn't shy away from sex, as you put it, the characters simply didn't cooperate. Thank you for not forcing them into a situation that for who they were, would be fully disjointed, false.

Very enjoyable trip down memory lane and what could easily have been. The shared intimacy here does not lie within the physical sense but within communication and reminiscence.

One of the most tenderly romantic stories I've ever read. I had tears in my eyes from about a third of the way through, and my heart felt peeled by the end. Expertly crafted. So subtly beautiful. Thank you for a most inspiring story.

I guess there is nothing so sad, as two young lovers whose hearts touch only briefly, then are separated forever by time and circumstance. Yet, that magic moment only continues to live in their memories. Thank you for a wonderful story.

when i read a story in romance section... I dont give a damn whether there is sex of not... What i look for is feelings... And this one here certainly had them... 5 star from me :)

I'm totally on board with these two, and don't seem to care about either of their spouses. I'm wanting life to create a set of events where they can end up together. Nicely written.

and if they decide to have a life, next time. It will have been worth the wait.

I fully understand what they are going through.

This story was interesting, but kind of vague. I couldn’t figure out if it was a “lost love” or a “second chance” story. Either way, I did enjoy it. Now I can read Chapter 2 to see how it ends. If it does.

If they want to, they will.

I hope they do...because they both care so much.

Oh, I loved this one. I love the imperfections and screwups of authentic people and the depth of feelings, and despite being short this story has it all. Thank you.

I really enjoy your writing. gets me in the feels every time. I hope to be able to do the same one day with my own stories.