All Comments on 'Life on the Road'

by Cromagnonman

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice story.

Enjoyed it. Kinda rapid fire in spots...were you trying to keep the length down? One note: I love Australia; but, like most non-Aussies, the slang can be difficult to decipher, even in context. Explanatory paretheses would not detract from the flow and be ever so helpful to those of us unfortunate enough to live elsewhere.

J in California

AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
I liked the story plot and really liked the background-

I felt as if I was there. Even though I have never been to Austrailia, I've seen movies and pictures that helped to understand. Excellent is a word that comes to mind.

tastethejuicetastethejuiceover 13 years ago
Been there

Thanks Buddy, after nearly 40years behind the wheel in this vast brown land it felt good to be there with Mike and Kate and yeah I did spend a few of them in a Loiue. Another great story, Thanks again

auhunter04auhunter04almost 13 years ago
maybe I missed it

I never saw where they went back to pick up the dropped trailers.

I guess I will just have to read again. It is good enough to be read sevewral time to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The trailers...

were picked up by the other truck sent down from Darwin at the same time as the heavy-tow truck.

Having spent over half my life in South Australia, I enjoy Cromagnonman's stories, and I even learned something from this one. I have been living in Tasmania for the last 10 years, and didn't know about the almond/grape switch. What a shame, the profusion of almond blossom was inspiring.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ON THE ROAD NO MORE AGAIN

time for the farmer in the dell. TK U MLJ LV NV

bruce22bruce22over 10 years ago
Wonderful Tale

And some very fine people plus one bad egg. CM can really write!

HighlandLaddieHighlandLaddieover 7 years ago
nice little love story

life is better on the station than driving road trains all day long...

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

it is a very good story, i like it a lot AAA+++

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