All Comments on 'Life Story 01'

by himherandher77

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readyeddyreadyeddyover 10 years ago
wonderful, absolutely wonderful

I really hope it is true, true life is so much better than fantasy. other questions are in my mind but I best not ask them, I am sure you know them.

Thank you for sharing. Eddy

himherandher77himherandher77over 10 years agoAuthor
@readyreddy

@ readyreddy

Yes its true and in the coming chapters of my life story u will get addicted to my History!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
U write like a texter

Remember u r writing a story, not texting. Hope u appreciate the parody of my comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Could be much better:

I usually,do not complain,about any story here,but yours was hard to read...Use a dictionary,to spell words right,and your usuage of engilsh,need some work...Other than those two problems,a nice story.....ripper

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years ago
This isn't literotica, because it's neither erotic, nor literature. It's twitter with more characters.

You wrote this like you typed it out to friends on your phone. Horrible, HORRIBLE writing, and little or nothing positive to say about it.

If you're going to write a story, WRITE A FUCKING STORY! Use full sentences, and at least ATTEMPT to spell words correctly, and WITHOUT "abreves".

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sucks

Super Ducks even!!!

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