by Sexy_Lisa
love your storyyyy!!!!!
it is wonderful that their feelings was now the reason for happiness and saved them big time...in stead of being the cause for confusion and depression!!
Very nice build up! almost did not want it to end!
I almost quit reading at the beginning, thonking this was going to be a depressing story. Luckily and happily i'm very glad that I kept reading! Thank you for a wonderfully written and very uplifting story.
What a great story, I hope you write more eventually, like that Rosie decided to feminize John as revenge for being so bossy to her, yes as Transfemale thats just me
This was a great story. Great build up and you really connected to the story. I love that there were three slow and detailed erotic scenes, instead of one quick one. Magnificent, great job.
This was a wonderful story. It shows how love comes into your life unexpectedly. Keep writing, you have a gift.
I liked your story very much. There were some small problems here and there, but they were only minor things. Overall, a very well thought-out piece that warms the heart and soothes the soul. Lisa and Anna seem to be living people, perhaps semi-biographical. That can make things easy and hard.
Looking forward to your next story. It doesn't have to be of the same sort. Try something different to spread your wings.
too bad you skipped ahead instead of taking us along for the ride with them thru the whole vacation and college years
You write well and it is great to find a story worth reading. Thank you for your work. If you really are interested in how I think you could improve......... I agree with a previous comment that the ending seemed a little rushed, compared to the great build up. It's good to have a definite and happy ending, but your characters were strong enough for another chapter. Not really interested in a travel log, but maybe how they adjusted to parenthood.
This story still compares very well to most though! Happy to reread and will look out for your other stories.
May have felt a little rushed at some points, but it was a very touching and relatable story. Well done.
this story shows alot of love and passion...very great story...its about things that happen to people in life...and im oneof those people that can truely relate to alot of this story...thanks for writing and hopin to read many more from you just as good if not better. then this one.
Some is reposting your story. http://www.literotica.com/s/a-life-worth-living?page=3
To all that have contacted me letting me know someone had posted my story under a different name, I want to thank you for bringing this to my attention.
I love the love story... i don't mind not having a hot steamy sex scene as it wasnt really needed on how the story ended. It was just enough for both to realized that they are Gay!!! One of the stories I read that I gave 5 starts!!!!!
Really like that they found each other and save one another !!!!
CS
MY MY. I'M NOT CERTAIN BUT I THINK THIS STORY RUNS NECK TO NECK WITH
BRENDA'S JOURNEY. SENTIMENTAL, EMOTIONALLY DRIVEN. REVEALING IN HOW THE HEART CAN AND WILL STEER A PERSON IF GIVEN THE OPPORTUNITY.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. THANK YOU LISA.
12🌹 roses and 5🌟's
I love this story and all your other stories. The way you develop them is so amazing that when I start reading I don't want to stop. And you always complete your stories well. I think you're an amazing writer,very entertaining. Please write more,i have read almost all of your stories here. I am looking forward to reading more.
I liked the story, but there was a long build up and a quick ending. When I saw that I was on page 5 and I knew that there was only 6 pages to the story I was worried about what was going to happen. Woosh, this happens, that happens, blat, blat-blat.
Maybe the author has a copy that is 9 or 10 pages long, where the story does not end so quickly with everything crammed together; that is the one I'd like to read.
Fantastic story but ............... could have done with another page or 3
Sexy_Lisa this is a brilliant story how you met each other and the life you have made will you get married and be as happy and loving as you are now because I think you deserve each other and hope everything you do as a loving couple you deserve each other thank you for sharing your story.xxxx
Loved this story and know that depression drains you to a point that breathing seems worthless. I have been battling nearly my entire life but little works like this help a little.
At least one commenter seems to think this is autobiographical. I admit it does feel a bit autobiographical. And, I suppose, everything we write is a bit autobiographical.
If it is, then I agree with the other commenter: You deserve you happiness (and three+ kids).
Oh. And good story. Almost forgot to say that...
I absolutely Loved the story. It was the best I ever read. I also wished that I could find someone just as easy as you did. I don't have parents. They both have passed. But I want to say how much I really want a woman to have and to love me just like you found on your lonely journey. I am so in awl of you. I am an old man and just wanted to say Hi . Great story.....L / Fuzz
Every so often on this site, I read a story and think that it's a new favourite. Well... It's just happened again, I absolutely loved this! The only downside was that it had to end.
This is definitely 5 stars for me ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
What a pity there are not more altruistic people in his world! I am surprised an American author even considers the plight of those less fortunate or in trouble. My experience of americans has them in a totally different light. Shame.
good story though and a truly heart warming ending.
You need to write more. Even your English is passable.
I think this is your best story so far!
Two people saving each other and falling in love!
My only criticism is it seemed so fast at the start, they went from saving each other to "I Love You" very quickly, both would have been a bit more reserved after what had happened to each of them, but I suppose love does conquer all!
Another really good Story!
Thank you