All Comments on 'Life's Surprises'

love this, especially as my names luka and i have a hot friend called cody!!!

Nice pacing, a slow, tentative buildup.... really sweet

Wonderfully written... thoroughly enjoyed the Entire story... plz expand on it.. an allow us to see their relationship move forward.... thanx again.... Jacquelynn

So I liked the idea of this story. The beginning was good but I found it bland. No feeling. Maybe I've been reading way too much but it felt like I was just reading a bunch of facts. I got bored before it got to the fun parts. There is a lot of potential here so don't be discouraged. I hope you write some more.

TM

I liked it a lot. When you got to it the sex was great. Hope you continue this story with another chapter or two.

I think you and your pieces are wonderful!!!!

I loved it and I hope you'll add more chapters. You know before I finished reading this story I fell asleep (not due to boredom), due to side effects from some meds I have to take. Trust me I was fighting to keep my eyes open and finish what I was reading. I only tell you this so you'll understand when I say if you don't add more chapters, that I did and it ended hot, exciting and beautiful (remember I was in a druged induced sleep, so I was dreaming my ass off and thought I was still reading.. Ha-ha). So please give us more chapters and make my dreaming ass dream come true. Thanks

Bravo! Very well-written story of a young man learning there is more to life than what meets the eye. I'm not usually one for a lot of romantic detail, but it works well in this story. And the sex scenes were hot. Got me hard thinking about how much Luka enjoyed his deflowering by Cody's hard cock.

It is nice to read a story about two guys, written by a female. The male anatomy is made for penetration and for most males, penetration is the ultimate, but for some males the need is to be penetrated. Similar to a female, a bottom male puts himself in a vulnerable position and allows a man to enter him. It is an intimate act and goes beyond sex when a kiss is added. Being penetrated and kissed is an act of surrendering that appeals to many women and bottom males.

A truly erotic story...thank you.

Loved it!🥰🥰🥰