by mjlance
Well written, great diction, and sooooo hot. I could clearly imagine this story; it wasn't ridiculously exaggerated (which can be a major turn off). Can't wait for the continuation :)
I really appreciate that you've given me your time, not only to read my story, but to leave comments as well. It makes me so happy to know that you enjoyed it.
And If you want to read more, there are links in my profile. Working on more stuff to upload to Literotica as we speak. :)
Very nice! You've hit on several of my favorite fantasies, and in such a lyrical manner. I look forward to more.
Nice story, not sure where the title description comes in about ligature marks though? Would have preferred that there was precautions taken to ensure safe sex, not doing so is bad form for a dominant.
Tess (uk)