by jack_straw
You did a great job! Good writing it flowed well!
I enjoyed it! To bad for his prude wife!
You have presented an excellent story. It is good in theme, detail, and editing. All around an excellent product.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
i really enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more
The climax is built up slowly, keeping you on the edge. Superb piece of writing.
Amazing that these two waited as long as they did! Both turned out to be a couple of wanton sluts. Hottest fantasy I've read in some time. Very sexy, and dirty as hell. More?
I really liked this story, just wish I had been her dad in this story!!!
a daughter like this, its highly probable she would give him children from their union.
Well, that was fun, but..."her orgasm burst like a boil"? Not sure if I'd want to have an orgasm like that! Lol