All Comments on 'Like Mother Like Daughter'

good story , great use of metophors , was a little concerned with the last page the story seemed to loose some of its power - but overall great reading

I won't read any more of your stories. This was total bullshit.

Story did seem to lose steam in the end, but an overall enjoyable read. Will read some more of your work.

Sorry, but this one just doesn't hang together. In most of your stories there is character development, sometimes more, sometimes less. But in this one we never really come to understand just what it was that made each one so irresistably attractive to the other, why each one got hit.

But worry not, I will continue to read through your list, and look forward to more of your excellent writing.

Dinsmore your location is right in my part of town of Atlanta but in the other direction when Amanda was pregnant with there first I thought you were going to pull one of those scenes where Amanda would pass away during giving birth and leave him with the baby you only made on typo in the whole story.

will you being continuing with this story?

Pat

Excellent story. I read many on this site and this was extremely hot.

A very well written work. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks.

Interesting ideas but put together poorly

I am less impressed with our hero this time - he still was a more than willing participant in the cheating - even if he did live to feel guilty -

It was a vital plot point, I agree but still a point of failure for him IMHO.

should have been in Loving Wives. Still 5*

Well written, very interesting story. Another great happily ever after.