All Comments on 'L'il Sis Ch. 10'

GLAD TO SEE HUNTER IS GONE

I'm glad to see that Hunter got what he deserved! It will be good to continue reading what happens next with Ry and Ally. So keep it up!!!

Great Job on Hunter, he got what he deserved, and looks like Ally has found out what jealous feelings can do to someone, especially when she got them after agreeing to what was going to happen while poor Ryan was betrayed with her little soiree into the parking garage!! I have an idea that the Parents are actually much more "sexual" than the kids think, and might even be the "watchers" at the resort, which I bet is really some kind of swingers club that they were spending the week at!! Just a thought but Please keep the story going, as long as Ry and Ally stay in Love!!

I love this story. Please write more.

let's see some more...

i think you should keep going with this story its going on well

You seriously need to continue the story cause though its very hot and totally turns me on but im also soooo curious about what's gonna happened next so like seriously?Continue.and post part 11 fast!!

I laughed my ass off when hunter got what was cuming to him you have to keep this going I'm betting the parents know how could they not hear there daughter geting fucked a few rooms away she is loud from what I can tell from the stories just don't stop writing

Love it, please continue

I certainly hope so!!!

When it hits 4.5 and becomes HOT I'll write chapter 11!

Come on Tomwine, im dying to find out what happens! will 4.44 rating do???

If you're writing some more you have another pool party where each of the girls get it double penetrated by their brother and the other ones brother!

Fun for all!!!

Dude loved the first 10 cant wait for the next ones to be released from theit prison ;) so plz hurry also might wanna proof read b4 posting others noticed a few errors so if i was a publisher id wanna publish u

I loved the first nine chapters, but the way the gang treated Hunter was too harsh. Unnecessary cruel and it didn't really jibe with the way he was treated earlier in the story. Overall a great story, very hot sex, and good set ups. I would love, love, to read more about this brother sister story, and having Ally be a little slutty while her bro is bi-minded just makes for a hotter story. I really wish you keep this going for a few more chapters. And just who is watching? Damn fine story that actually is original. And the scene with Hunter, Damon, and Ally was my favorite. I'll read that again.

I enjoyed the first five parts of the series, but adding the gay stuff really killed it for me. Sorry, man. I'm done reading.

And I have a feeling I know who it is too... ROFLMAO... Are they gonna be surprised if it is who I think it is...

This story is so amazing I could imagine Keith ramming his beautiful cock in my ass and I was begging for more as I read the story.Jw