All Comments on 'Lilly's Gift'

by cymry

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Real "Loving Wives"

With a pace that built steadily to a nicely written climax. Liked it alot!

sherlock40sherlock40over 18 years ago
An actual "loving wife" story!

It's getting harder to find these on this site. Thank you for the time and effort you took in writing this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
True Loving Wife

I can see that at least ONE author on this site knows what a "Loving Wives" story is really about.

This is a very good story about a woman who loves her husband and shows it. How some authors thinks that cuckolding a husband or cheating on him at every turn is a 'Loving Wives' story is just bullshit.

Keep up the storyline and you will find some very loyal readers.

Thank you for your creative effort.

JBG

EffectEffectover 18 years ago
Great story about a real loving wife

There are so many ways the "loving wives" section can be broken up but it's nice to get a story about an actual loving wife, a story about just the husband and wife and how much they love each other. Granted this could go in romance or ec but I wish there were more stories like this in this section.

Maybe there should be an actual husband and wife section for stories that are only about husbands and wives and don't contain any other people having sex with them or cheating instead of breaking up the LW section. Just a thought.

Good story.

Adrian LeverkuhnAdrian Leverkuhnover 18 years ago
the voice of experience

I think I envy David. In fact, I know I do! Author writes with empathy and compassion, turning a small moment in two people's lives into a touching duet. Makes me think about just how sweet life can be...a rare treat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow What a great story!

It is so refreshing today to read a story such as this. Cymry, You are the best I've seen on here! Keep it up! Loving husbands and wives alike salute you everywhere!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good romantic story

Sweet story, you painted a nice picture of the feeling between them.

saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
A Simple Story Told Well

This is an excellent slice of life story and a great example less being more. It was full of love and passion played out by ordinary people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I love happy endings!

A nice Loving Wives Romance (How is that for the new category name?) Very nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

A sweet story, but it kinda misses the point of the category, "Loving Wives". Check out the subtitle of the category on the index. This would be better listed as "Erotic Couplings" or even "Romance".

IrfonIrfonalmost 11 years ago
Da Iawn...

Ardderchog Cariad !!

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

And pork chops too!

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