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ProvocativeProvocativeabout 12 years ago
More please

ooohh, I definately want to read more. I hope you put a second part to this story. Thanks so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

GREAT read!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
should have been

a loving wives story and I didn't like it anyway

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More

MORE PLEASE

tenebretenebreabout 12 years ago
A sequel please

Terrific work. One of my all time favorites on this site. Please give us a sequel. I'd love to know what happens next. Can she return to her old life? What happens between her and her father-in-law? Does she finally sleep with the club owner? There's so many possibilities for where to take this story.

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