All Comments on 'Linda Ch. 01'

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FRSWRITERFRSWRITERalmost 14 years ago
Outstanding

That was one of the hottest stories I have read, every young lad should be taught by an older babe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Too Fast

Needs details! A nice concept, but so much more could have been done in slow, intermediate steps. For example instead of just sucking the breasts, there could have been a slow uncovering of them, some instruction on how to touch them, heft them, play with them with his hands, first one, then the other, and finally both -- long before leaping to sucking them.

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