All Comments on 'Lindie's Victory'

Very bad illustrations in this story.

Good and well written so far, though hard to follow from one to the next. Have no idea why the other commentor did not like the illustrations.

Since a couple people mentioned them, I'll add my comment that the illustrations seemed very well done. They didn't add much to the story for me personally (I'd already imagined the characters much differently), but if one doesn't like them they're easy enough to skip over.

Great writing and a good story, I can't wait to hear more. My only...irritation?...with the story is that I feel consistently more confused by what's going on, rather than less. Keep some mystery for later, but it'd be nice to have some cleared up, too!

Thanks again for writing, it's all really good stuff!

Since a couple people mentioned them, I'll add my comment that the illustrations seemed very well done. They didn't add much to the story for me personally (I'd already imagined the characters much differently), but if one doesn't like them they're easy enough to skip over.

Great writing and a good story, I can't wait to hear more. My only...irritation?...with the story is that I feel consistently more confused by what's going on, rather than less. Keep some mystery for later, but it'd be nice to have some cleared up, too!

Thanks again for writing, it's all really good stuff!

What I write and what ends up here are sometimes two different things. My original story was too graphic, too violent, and at one point, may have seemed like more snuff than horror. Lindie's story is probably far from over, but I wanted to give her a rest and branch out a little. The illustrations of the wolf man have been some of my best, yet, but I'd be riding a fine line of bestiality if I tried to put the pictures of a wolf beast with a raging hard-on in the story. Yes, the original story was a little different.

The images also get edited, and there are limits to how much quality is retained when the story is finally posted. In the end, I'm forced to 'dumb down' the graphics so the file size is more manageable.

I use Poser to create the images. It's easy to learn and easy to use. And, it's affordable.

As far as the first comment about the poor illustrations, everyone has a right to their own opinion, but I'd prefer constructive criticism instead of someone just saying they didn't like them. What didn't you like about them, so I can get better? Do you want to help, or are you just being a jerk?

To those that keep sending me anonymous emails of praise, thank you. Unfortunately, I haven't been too motivated to write anymore, so this will probably be it for awhile. Thanks for the kind reviews and comments, to those that left them.

Interesting