All Comments on 'Lindsey'

When stories are short, limited plot and focussed solely on the sex, I often find them unfulfilling. However, this piece is above the norm. It is written well and evokes a sense of reality with an attention to detail and quality phrasing: "She moved with a grace that was as natural to her as stumbling was to me." Nice sense of connection and the promise of an evolving relationship.

Beautiful!