All Comments on 'Lioness Goes Wild'

Honestly, there is not another who writes like you. Again, your descriptive powers make the reader feel everything. There is such passion in your submissions. I have always liked your style of not using quotes with your dialogue. Those are just some of the things that sets you apart from the rest. I wonder Scotsman, can we expect a book from you? Thank you for another excellent read.

Your storys draw me into them so deeply everytime i read them! I love the way you write and the way you portray the raw emotions so well.

I've now read everything you and your partner have posted on this site, and have come away from every story with an appreciation of the intensity of the sexual fever your characters share. In this one, however, the pure, raw, animalistic hunger of the need reaches new heights. I have never seen need expressed more clearly, or more eloquently. You have now ruined me for any other woman. The desperate, blood-lust hunger of the lioness, this bitch in heat, is almost terrifying, making the lust shown by any other woman I have ever known or read about seem indifferent by comparison. I need a cold shower, and she needs to be packed in dry ice!

As ever, and alwaysbrilliant oh delicious prey!

Really very good but needs lots of work on punctuation.

Why were they forced into seperation. How old were they? Were either married? A little more intro would have made a much smoother story.

I wish more authors would produce such high quality stories and take chances with their characters. Romance is nice but hot sex and strong personalities can be just as arousing (sigh)…

This story is soooo to the left of Melanie. It borders on light bdsm (which is good, for me lol) I'm going to love this story. I love strong powerful women! More please!

Both your stories have unique interesting storylines. I love them both! It's a courageous position to be a renegade, and I think that's part of your intention: to challenge us, using your excellent writing to wind us in.

There is a fine line between passion and agression. And there is something dangerous yet exhilarating about the way lioness lunges back and forth over that line. I wanted to be her! God I love your writing! Keep them coming!

I love your writing Scotsman. This is a different story from you. You write all views so well. You are very talented indeed.

After your last offering, this surprised me. Well done!

met a woman like her, but I would love to.

Wow! What great images and so deftly depicted.

Ohhhhhhhhh…(what else can I say??)

Been waiting for you to get out of the BDSM pit and back into what you write and express so well. And here you are! So eloquent! The way I love you best> Beautiful steamy hot raunchy sex. More please!

Imagine you turning out two such different stories within days of each other! This was much more my style of story - and yours too, if the truth isn't too obvious right there is the writing. This is your trademark brilliance, sparkling bright. Beautiful!

I gorged on every wild and steaming hot word of this. Delicious! <>(smacking lips)

That was awesome. My laptop is in flames. So am I! It's been a while Scotsman. I've missed you…

This was sooo fucking intense!! Damn you are talented...sorry for the language but this story just deserves some strong language. A-mazing! Nothing like the bland boring packet stuff most people here publish as erotica. Gawd love us! Happy to have found you now tho. I'll be reading you, hun.

Not many write the heat of passion particularly well, but this was spot on! A really amazingly hot read and one of the best stories i have read so far. Please write more stories like it! I found you in Epicuria's favourites,and I am delighted to have you both now as my prospective entertainment. Between the two of you, I know I'm in for a lot of fabulous reading! THANK YOU!

Want to be there.

How can one piece of writing be so brutally raw and excruciatingly romantic at exactly the same time? I've read things that managed to alternate rapidly between the two... never anything that reached so far as to find that place where they intersect and become one terrible incendiary sweetness. Until now.

It is <i>mind-cracking</i>.

delicious