All Comments on 'Lion's Den Ch. 02'

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silver766silver766over 12 years ago
Damn, great story!!!!

Please keep this story going. Iv'e been watching for it everyday since the first one. The charcters are great, the sex is hot, and you've defintely got me on edge. Loved it, ranked it no less than a five.

Thank you, from miss silver766

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVE IT!!

Your story is friggin awesome- anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

brownskingurlbrownskingurlover 12 years ago
lovin it!!!

welcome back!!!! awesome update! is she pregnant? more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more more please

that was great please keep the stories coming..ok

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

leo's dad helped find her mom right

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Five.

divastar88divastar88over 12 years ago
LOVE IT!!

MORE MORE MORE . I am loving this series so far, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Per favore!

Keep it coming.

verbicideverbicideover 12 years ago
Liking it more and more

This is building up to be a really fine tale. The characters and the writing are excellent. I also like how you present Max as a strong woman, for real, unlike some of the "strong women" protagonists that suddenly become all weepy, love struck, indecisive and weak once confronted with a "real man". I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

man, if a man was chasing me like a bull i'd run too. guys like these just dont know when to stop. but this is definatley interesting.

willerileywillerileyover 12 years ago
FIVE STARS

Great sense of place, atmosphere, emotional & physical descriptions plus fantastic storytelling = 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
AMAZING......

One of the best stories on LitE in a very long time. I absolutely LOVE Max!!! I am soooo tired of these cliched weak heroines and Max is everything I wish many of these PUBLISHED author's heroines would be. She refuses to let Leo tell her what to do - weakness for him or not - she does not cave!!

I am so looking forward to the next chapter in Max & Leo's journey :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
love it...

Wow...I would've never thought 2 mob connected families and two stubborn mob brats.

Great twist.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
Please hurry up

Please Hurry up with the next installment. This is just to funny lol

honeybreehoneybreeover 12 years ago
An unusual twist...

What an interesting web you are weaving with the characters. I can't wait to see what happens between these two especially with the element of adding their parents as fuel

shyintxshyintxover 12 years ago

I love the twist of his parents knowing her parents.

whatilikeaboutuwhatilikeaboutuover 12 years ago
Wow..Excellent!

I love the chemistry between Max and Leo. You realize Max's parent's story is a story that could have been wriiten. You are very good. I am totally engaged. By the way, Leo acts like he was struck by the "thunderbolt." :)

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
OH

yeah, I love the drama and suspense of this love story, I hope there is more and that they are together in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oooh!

Great spicy read but you have to write Max's parents story as a prequel.

Pretty please with sugar on top?

Nauti Nymph

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ONE WORD

FAN-FREAKIN-TASTIC !

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
getting better and better

it is really good and the twist are making it even more exciting to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
mind blown!

The twist at the end fucked my mine all up!

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