by Elektrical
Please keep this story going. Iv'e been watching for it everyday since the first one. The charcters are great, the sex is hot, and you've defintely got me on edge. Loved it, ranked it no less than a five.
Thank you, from miss silver766
Your story is friggin awesome- anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
welcome back!!!! awesome update! is she pregnant? more please!
MORE MORE MORE . I am loving this series so far, keep up the good work.
This is building up to be a really fine tale. The characters and the writing are excellent. I also like how you present Max as a strong woman, for real, unlike some of the "strong women" protagonists that suddenly become all weepy, love struck, indecisive and weak once confronted with a "real man". I look forward to reading more.
man, if a man was chasing me like a bull i'd run too. guys like these just dont know when to stop. but this is definatley interesting.
Great sense of place, atmosphere, emotional & physical descriptions plus fantastic storytelling = 5 stars
One of the best stories on LitE in a very long time. I absolutely LOVE Max!!! I am soooo tired of these cliched weak heroines and Max is everything I wish many of these PUBLISHED author's heroines would be. She refuses to let Leo tell her what to do - weakness for him or not - she does not cave!!
I am so looking forward to the next chapter in Max & Leo's journey :-)
Wow...I would've never thought 2 mob connected families and two stubborn mob brats.
Great twist.
Please Hurry up with the next installment. This is just to funny lol
What an interesting web you are weaving with the characters. I can't wait to see what happens between these two especially with the element of adding their parents as fuel
I love the chemistry between Max and Leo. You realize Max's parent's story is a story that could have been wriiten. You are very good. I am totally engaged. By the way, Leo acts like he was struck by the "thunderbolt." :)
yeah, I love the drama and suspense of this love story, I hope there is more and that they are together in the end.
Great spicy read but you have to write Max's parents story as a prequel.
Pretty please with sugar on top?
Nauti Nymph
it is really good and the twist are making it even more exciting to read.