by Lisa34d
Not very flattering comments huh? Well I enjoyed it anyway. It was a little bit short, would have liked to have read more. But I did enjoy what was there.
I enjoyed that, thanks.
For the negative people; if you are going to criticise, please do it in a positive way and suggest ways to improve the submission. Or, write a story yourself to show how it should be done.
To just pointlessly snipe at the author is cruel and unhelpful.
BI thought it was a hot story. Got me excited because this is something my wife and I have talked about doing too. Love public sex and showing wife off. Thanks
This is a porn sight, you're supposed to fuck guys in public, if that's what you like to do. It was done in a way that probably most people didn't know what was going on so who cares? Way to go Lisa!! Most of us are envious of Bill!!
Replace know with knowing in one paragraph and the delightful story will be even better.