All Comments on 'Little Black Ball Ch. 01'

You sick PUPPY! Loved it...talk about JUSTICE! LOL! If only this kind was doled out in real life! What goes around comes around doesn't QUITE make it here. LOL!

I loved it. Finally, someone with IMAGINATION and the writing skills to carry it out. Congratulations.

Now I think I need to go to church.

please dont ever publish capater 2

Forget the Anonymous Clown. I liked the story and esp. the fact that the Revenge was on both the Wife and her Lesbian Lover now they both will be doing Cock or hurting.

C.Frommn You are the clown. The person before just made a statement on what he thought was a awful story. I agree with him what a bad read.

Nice story, told with imagination that is sadly lacking in most of the stories in Literotica. However, your editing has just begun: (1) before gerunds the pronoun must be in the objective case; (2) the subject of a sentence is in the subjective case, as are the nouns in apposition with the subject.

good revenge story.

Revenge played a part in this story but more important Gary acted out of self defense. His financial advisor had conspired to ruin him not just personally by destroying his marriage but financially as well. He would be not just homeless but penniless. Since the transfer of funds went through his wife it would be years if ever he would get back half of his funds. There is no indication that Elaine worked outside the home so Gary would have to work for the rest of his life to restore a fraction of his life's earnings. One question comes up is what happens to Jeanie legally since she took from her other clients? What is the origin of the little black ball? What happens to the sex partners of Elaine? Thanks for an outstanding story! I look forward to more stories in the future.

Me again, just back filling with your stories. Again I liked this story, a little off the wall but still a good read, thanks for writing.

really, really strange.

Justice was served. Let his bitch wife suffer and I am sure that Jean will pay (in one way or another). Off the wall stuff keeps us on our toes.

I was all for the cheating hoe suffering, but now innocents are gonna die n she is ok with her actions due too to magic brainwashing. The suffering is improperly distributed.

Not a.huge.horror.fan, but that was good.

Actually, a great story. I gave it a “5”. I think literotica could benefit from more supernatural or sci fi

stories. The other thing I never get over is, how these bitches think ruining the man they loved, us the way to go. Are the colleges now offering courses, in “Narcissism 101?”

In any case, I loved it. Keep up the great work!

Simply LOVE this story....the author manages to suspend belief sufficiently to make the supernatural element work....and the BTB part is so very very over the top...that it is very satisfying. It is really nice to see purely evil people get what they so richly deserve..... And in a spiritual sense....they fully REAP what they have SOWN.

again NICE!