by damonX
All was fine but the dirty sentence from the girl just didnt fit at all. Completely ruined it.
Gee, the only thing you didn't include in your unbelievable story - she wasn't a virgin. How could you have not included that with all your other first? Sorry, but it was truly a story that didn't strike me as interesting. As a handicap person myself, you showed like of consideration to one who might have required that facility.
That was awesome! I wish I had enough balls to take the reigns as you did.
Yes, it's fantasy and a great way to experience some of our darker thoughts, but this Damon is kind of a Demon and should go to jail. I hope that the story helps some people to keep these thoughts as a fantasy!
I agree it was rape, she said No! This guy is an Asshole only interested in getting his self off.
Forcing oneself onto someone who initally says "no" is rape - not a good thing to consider cockily!
Love the incorporation of anal into your stories! Thanks for writing like you do!
Yours stories are great. If only there were more of them, or writers who wrote more like you.
I usually love your stories, but damn that guy was a complete arse! I'd have given him a good slap, lol.
Guy develops an instant attraction to an attractive shy girl in a black Mini Skirt. Hustling her into a bathroom the two of them proceed to get it on. Hot Read!
Guy develops an instant attraction to an attractive shy girl in a black Mini Skirt. Hustling her into a bathroom the two of them proceed to get it on. Hot Read!
That guy was an asshole.
That didn't turn me on at all
it just pissed me off.
You're a very talented writer. It's hard to write a character who's so "quietly" forceful, i.e. simply not taking any no's as well as you did. Obviously she was reluctant and really thinking she shouldn't be, but I never had that oh, kinda feel sorry for that girl, feeling.
Totally 'licious story.
Thanks for the fun!