All Comments on 'Little Sister's Initiation'

by TromeoQue

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Straight to the Point

It was good. But it could do with a little more build up and description. It helps some of the readers with a more active imagination.

This could be a great series, if you made into one. But, my suggestion is to drag out the story just a bit more. For me, it was just over too fast. But again, great job. Keep it up. :]

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
DITTO 1

COMPLETELY AGREE with preceding comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Sister Love

I love to hear what happen after there breakfast and what her bother had MMMMMMMMMMMM

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I love the whole twin thing but a little more prestorie would have been nice but over all good story

horny2doithorny2doitabout 8 years ago

WOW - very arousing and the dialogue among the 2 sisters and brother while limited, started their new adventure off well. I hope you write a second chapter soon, as there are all kinds of great things that can happen now. I think the older sister should eat little sister's pussy and the brother should screw his older sister while Little Sis watches !! We need some descriptive info about all 3 siblings and more dirty ideas and dialogue among themselves. Thanks !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice

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Your adventure sounds fun I wish I had sister too .. you still all do the sex ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot story!!!

That is so hot. I love having my cock sucked. It's so exhilarating and a very intense intimate thing. I can't say that I would get with my younger sister but I did have a first cousin try and get with me at a party back in the.day. We were both drunk and I freaked out at the time, but now I regret not takimg her up on it. She's hot and has a small frame with a huge rack. I'm sure alot of family members have consensual sex. Thanks for sharing, it really turned me on

horny2doithorny2doitabout 6 years ago

Yes, a very well written and hot story. The spying baby sister seems to like what she saw and then felt how good it really was !! Hopefully now all 3 can do each other etc. Hopefully, baby sister will want to eat out her big sister and then do her hung brother by herself too. Please we need more chapters and thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Unrealistic, that she would suddenly suck off her brother and then have sex with him when she was still a virgin. Too much a fantasy, short on any real hot writing. Sounds like it was written by a 13-year-old pimple faced virgin

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