All Comments on 'Live from the Game Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The author has described a long list of "crimes" by Deanna

And Ryan has successfully addressed the excuses and potential rationalizations. In a nutshell Deanna has turned into an extremely selfish disrespectful whore who cares nothing for her husband, her family, or her marriage. If she did, then she wouldn't have cheated or acted the way towards Ryan over what seems to be a long time.

The marriage has been one sided for a long time as Ryan realized with the gift of the GPS watch. She has so little respect for him it is not funny.

Honestly this has been a hard read for me. I fear that there will be an RAAC even after all of this. Or that Ryan will allow her to raise the kids. How can you reconcile with someone who holds you in such contempt? Ryan has so far addressed all of the issues and revelations in a reasoned manner. How can you allow your kids to be raised by someone with such terrible morals?

I agree also with Anonymous from 8/22/17

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nothing Deanna did was illegal, althougb reprehensible

Ryan and company though, shold be in prison. Hope to see all parties get just desserts next chaper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Interesting

Very interesting.

ibbunkibbunkalmost 4 years ago

Good storyline, but very wordy.

Too much inner thoughts slows the flow of the story.

Thanks for your hard work.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

Nice!! Waiting for the RAAC CUCK to show!!!

hicountryriderhicountryriderover 2 years ago

Nothing Vienna did was illegal how about radiously immoral?

In any case anything that guys done to protect yourself this moral as far as I'm concerned. I'll bet you're one of those fellows who bleeds for criminals and has no compassion for victim

The above is not intended for the author but for one of the commenters below.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

After a disappointing first chapter, the following chapters are outstanding. 5++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She really a horrible person.

You can bet after her stud leaves she'll get another; she has an addictive sex compulsion.

Anyway he slices this he has to cut her lose FOR HIS SAKE.

He also needs emotional trauma counseling and an aggressive physical rehab program for his body. [Crystal was right about that part of the situation.]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a train wreck in painful slow motion.

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

Oh you have a devious mind, nicely done

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

It's definitely improving, but still has some flaws. Maybe it will all come together and all will be forgiven, on the writing front that is.

BigDee44BigDee444 months ago

Could Deanna by bi-polar?

Busman19639Busman196394 months ago

The story is getting better.

consulting91consulting912 months ago

This narrative is realistic on how the betrayed feels. I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Deanna isnt bi-polar shes merely a cunt.

Ryan is doing the right thing by planning and getting evidence and getting revenge not confronting her after the basball game where should could lie and say that was the only time or getting divorced immediately and get fucked in the divorce.

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