All Comments on 'Living Incubus Ch. 01'
by CarsonR
- 10 Comments
Anonymousalmost 16 years agowhere is the challenge? Forcing someone to want you is not the same as them wanting you. Might as well be writing about sex with a pocket pussy....only not as erotic.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoWouldn't be cool, if I could do anything I wanted? Charlie X anyone?
Anonymousalmost 16 years agohopefully you will have him stay at their house, using the wife in ways hubby never has,,making im watch as his wife is turned into a cum dump for the kid. and makinghubby watch,clean up etc....
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoMore ,More,More Great Job Whith this one so far
Keep Going And Do more stories just Like This!
animalmusicalmost 16 years agoKeep writing More just like this! Dont let anyone tell you your stories are bad. this type is refreshing
So keep writing more with themes just like this
Great job!
LasciviousNaturealmost 15 years agoYou did well! I just love your vocabulary choice! And the descriptions are just orgasmic! Every scene is perfectly clear in my mind! You are bloody brilliant! You could write those awesome paper back erotica! I applaud you!
Mr_Splatterheadabout 14 years agoThis was a great story, I loved the concept. Hope there will be more chapters to come!
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe first chapter of Living Incubus was fantastic. Anytime a 'happily' married woman can be taken by another male is incredibly hot.
