Living Next Door

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"Why now?"

"Do the words 'unrequited love' mean anything to you Nessie? Until a week ago, I thought you were talking about someone else, but some heavy hints have been dropped that you meant someone closer to home."

"Yes, next door." She replied, looking at me through teary eyes. "All the time you were thinking of Mel, I was thinking of you. What does that make us?"

"A pair of idiots I think." I grinned and hugged her, kissing away her tears. "How about a new start? As if we don't know one another?"

She nodded.

I took a couple of steps back and then held out my hand.

"Hello, I'm Doug. What's your name?" She giggled and blew her nose before taking my hand and shaking it.

"I'm Vanessa, pleased to meet you."

I pulled her towards me, and as the clocks rang in the New Year, accompanied by our fathers letting off rockets, I kissed her.

"Pleased to meet you Vanessa." Then I whispered in her ear. "Will you marry me?"

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SatyrDickSatyrDick8 months ago

[17.09.23]

Mucho Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice little unrequited love Romance. Well done! Great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the story, don’t think I could have done it though..would hurt too much to be around

Rancher46Rancher46almost 3 years ago

The story was good but like some others have said it needed a few more lines or an epilogue.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 5 years ago
Yeah

no wonder he got friend zoned. He thinks and behaves like a girl.

J_RReaderJ_RReaderabout 8 years ago
Romance

You have written a lovelly romance here.

Loving her but remaining a "friend" and giving help and advice when needed, poor chap but you did find a happy ending for him.

I think the ending was a bit quick, it deserved a few more lines.

This was also the first story I found on this site without any erotic, I was surprised.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 8 years ago
Second reading

I enjoyed reading it this time as much as I did the first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

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Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketalmost 9 years ago
Very good

A very nice story and fairly realistic and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nice one

That's a good story...

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