All Comments on 'Living Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yes, predictable

but so what, a very good loving story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
No Errors Even,

This to me was a great story.When there is a good submission someone always complains of spelling errors or punctuation. Not this time though, just a great story line.Well Done Storm.

hathorbr1hathorbr1about 12 years ago
Very Sweet!

I loved this story! It was short, sweet and to the point. Very well done!!!!!

Mostera1Mostera1about 12 years ago
Very Nice

A very pleasant read.

Thank you!

M1

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53about 12 years ago
Lovely

Very simple and direct. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Oh, yes.

That was fantastic! Yes, i did think it was very good. You have quite a talent. You could think of it as predictable, yes. But it was very much worth the time reading.

oldwayneoldwayneover 11 years ago
SP53 already said it.

I liked it too and you definitely have a fine talent. Thanks for your stories. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice one

That's a good story...

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketalmost 9 years ago
Very good

A very nice story and fairly realistic and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

MORE

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 8 years ago
Second reading

I enjoyed reading it this time as much as I did the first time.

J_RReaderJ_RReaderabout 8 years ago
Romance

You have written a lovelly romance here.

Loving her but remaining a "friend" and giving help and advice when needed, poor chap but you did find a happy ending for him.

I think the ending was a bit quick, it deserved a few more lines.

This was also the first story I found on this site without any erotic, I was surprised.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 5 years ago
Yeah

no wonder he got friend zoned. He thinks and behaves like a girl.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

The story was good but like some others have said it needed a few more lines or an epilogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the story, don’t think I could have done it though..would hurt too much to be around

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice little unrequited love Romance. Well done! Great read.

SatyrDickSatyrDick8 months ago

[17.09.23]

Mucho Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!

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It might look like I came late to writing, but in fact I have been scribbling (and typing!) for a long time now. I've just been reluctant to post any. I began posting my non-sexual stories on my blog site,and this led to me taking the plunge and revealing the darker side of my...

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