All Comments on 'Living on the Lam on a Volcano'

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Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Great Stuff!

Slick, well written, loved it!

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

This was a terrific story. Quite imaginative yet most believeable. Characters were emotionally strong. This could be developed into at least a novella if not a novel. Find a literary agent.

It's all in the title above. I goofed and am too sleepy now to retype. Mea culpa.

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

One of the best writers on Literotica

Fast moving, descriptive, this story is imaginatively written. One of your better stories. As usual the sex scenes are sensual and erotic. A writer who genuinely loves women. To anyone new on Literotica - take walk through the other stories this writer has completed - he is seriously good.

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Beautiful story

Thank you for writing this piece. I wish men would read this, women can only dream of this kind of love. Your writing is amazing

Anonymousover 9 years ago

Another 5!

Another well done with this story. I keep finding stories of yours I missed, and find another treasure. I remembered another of yours and I'm going to re-read it after this. Thank you, Mike

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