All Comments on 'Living with Katrina Ch. 11'

Sooo happy to see this chapter finally up!! Thank you for a great chapter!! I hope you keep writing, You are an amazing author!

jake says he is not the adventurous type yet she has him banging her in macys and now the park. uh dude you are that type now

The transition was done perfectly from love-lorn people to two people who are head over heels about each other discovering the passion that was missing. Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and I am thoroughly enjoying this story.

A change of tone in a story, without changing the characters along with it, is tricky to pull off, at best, yet you manage it nicely. Worth the wait.

I really expected something much better. If it had to be this way you should have just continued chapter 10. Their love story seemed dragged way too much than required.

I really want them to settle down and make babies.... Please

Finally finished reading all 11 chapters. I have to say, this thing rocks. Don't stop now! Keep them coming!

So FINALLY Jake and Katrina got together.

But what happens next?

Jake and katrina,they will be really a strange couple.

One loves freedom and the other loves order.But most important thing is that they love each other more than anything.

Nice work.Keep going buddy.

Many twists and turns along the way. Was glad to see these poor tortured souls (including the sister) get a chance at happy ever after. Very creative and interesting.

I came across this story three years ago when it was four chapters long. My laptop was then in imminent danger of being thrown across the room in frustration at the characters, followed by a paranoia that the author had been reading my journals... I have just finished the rest of the series, and am feeling utterly drained. Eight paragraphs before the end of chapter ten had me weeping in fear. I am glad this story does not come with a soundtrack otherwise it would need a health warning for such an emotional roller coaster. Thank you.

plz continue with brittany

Great story!

Thanks.

Loved the characters, the social dynamics and the delicious inner suffering. A wonderful piece of writing. keep writing!

He keeps saying your writing is garbage and keeps reading. Sad that he's had so little love and acceptance in his life. I'm praying to the universe for him.

You are good at writing light hearted sex.

Why did you stop writing? Seems we need a final chapter. I love they are together but where is the wedding and where is the sister celebrating with them? I w9uld also like to see that Kat continues making her mark as an artist though grounded in true love.

That was, by far, THE BEST story I've ever read online.. No words can sum up my experience..

I want you to know that i really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing. Hope you wont stop writing stories like this.

Hi LaRascasse,

First off - thanks for 10 great chapters, and thanks for finally giving Katrina a much needed break :-)

I have to say that I'm very impressed with your versatile writing technique. You have a great way with words, and the dialogs are all very natural and flowing really well.

You also have a real knack for building a story around some very interesting personalities, each with their own issues to deal with. It makes for some very sympathetic, yet flawed, characters to whom you feel you can relate – someone you would want to get to know better.

In my opinion your greatest asset is your ability to describe the personal events leading up to Jake and Katrina’s main issues - The attempted suicide, the drug abuse, Jake’s sister etc. etc., and your ability to wind it all together in one storyline. Each event in itself would have been interesting enough for you to have built an entire story around. Great work!

And now for the (friendly) critique ;-) It is almost a little anticlimactic how fast, especially Katrina, seems to brush off each of those life changing incidents. I would have liked to see Jake and Katrina work a bit longer and harder on getting back on track after the drug abuse, the suicide attempt, the Jared incident and so on.

In the same manor I don't think we really got the closure we were all hoping for regarding the psychotic millionaire. It almost seems that we are missing a last chapter of the story here. Jake was definitely meant to have come charging to the rescue of his girlfriend in a final showdown with this evil character.

Lastly I think Jakes abilities on the sheets seems a bit farfetched - him being a bit withdrawn, inexperienced and shy. This is where Katrina could really have taken him under her wing in the last chapter and 'educated' him in the finer arts of lovemaking - Katrina style ;-)

All little details, and all easily forgotten in the greater scheme of things! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story - more than enough to jump right on to Limbo. I'll drop you a line there as well.

I will definitely be keeping an eye out for more submissions from this fine author!

Regards

Kroelle

Another chapter or two would put the finishing touch to a good story.

with a Brittany's story

Incredible, best story ive read in years! More please!

Very talented writer, but I found it very difficult to believe the love between Jake and Kat. You did a fantastic job writing and creating a visual for the reader, but the differences in the main characters being so vastly different, I found it hard to "feel" a believable emotional romantic bond. Obviously others didn't have this problem so it could be just me. Very good writer though

Wow... he ended up with the whore. Or is it a drama queen? Drug addict? To much fiction here for me to enjoy. Maybe a believable relationship next time. It started out ok, but to really believe a guy would want to tie himself to this female....it just to unbelievable to be a good read. Women like this join the ranks of abuse for a reason. How could any reasonable person respect much less love a person like Kat.

You my friend have delivered a masterpiece. Not sure what you have done since publishing this but have you ever thought about or even considered going pro and full time writing? As the title states bravo my friend bravo.

Keep on writing, please!

There was one point in chapter 8 when I was like "come on you guys this is getting ridiculous" but it was worth the wait. Loved the portrayal of their mental states and the emotional scars left by everything that had come before. So well done. Thank you for your story!

never liked or got on with weak men, I find they create doubt and confusion in their partners and kids. I find it impossible to believe that a wife or girl friend can love and respect her partner and regularly slap them. In their subconscious they must think it is OK. My wife went thru a stage of slapping my arm in public if I mocked her or crack a joke she didn't like so when she did it in private I slapped her butt, she then slapped me again harder so I slapped her butt harder, she then said stop hitting me and I replied, you stop and I'll stop, she has never done it since. A strong man doesn't need to be a bully, just have standards and enforce them, words usually will do but if that is not enough don't stay in a relationship where you are a doormat, vote with your feet and walk away. You will get a reputation as one to be trusted and is reliable, people will turn to you when looking for help and your wife and kids will respect you. How can you trust some one like Jake, a lovely guy with no back bone who is just as likely to fall apart when something goes wrong. TK.

Just read the entire series for the first time and I absolutely love it. I doubt you will ever come back to it seeing as it finished at such an appropriate place and it's been so long, so I look forward to reading your other works. Thank you for the great read!

If that's the ending, it sucked!

It was nice to follow the story. I am just happy I could read it at once and had not to nibble my nails while waiting for the next chapter to come.

Jake is not weak at all in my opinion. Insecure, doubting? For sure. But to stay with the one he loves, no matter matter what, tells a lot about the size of his balls. To turn his back on her would have been easier.

I do miss though the final take down of this rich sadistic sicko. I think, he should well get what he deserves. With the aid of his powerful sister they should be able to give him hell.

I'm amazed about the variety of topics you merged into this plot. The preacherman or the PI e.g. The details about refurbishing pictures. Your restaurant scenes left me hungry.

Thank you for sharing!

Your characters are far too outlandish to make this into a passable story. Your main character is an aloof boring drone, which is basically de rigueur for this type of story. the main love interest is a mentally ill substance abuser with sex addict tendencies. other characters are a religious cult leader, a wealthy sadist who tortures women in his basement, and an emotionally stunted genius billionaire media tycoon. Come on, seriously. BTW, nobody can have an IQ of 200+. Such a result would be impossible to statistically verify.

Don’t worry about the nay sayers. This is a great story about how people deal with their lives. This story ends with hope! Please keep writing!

Turns and twists. Twists and turns. I enjoyed the story and that's a great reason for you to keep writing (I couldn't stop reading it). I may be one of the smaller groups of readers that say that but I like the interaction between the characters. The complicated people in your story give me a feeling of life. Most people in the world are complicated. I will be reading more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination. 5*

THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST STORY, ON THIS WEBSITE, THAT I HAVE EVER READ. TWISTS AND TURNS, UPS AND DOWNS, AND A GREAT ENDING. LOVE, DRAMA, HUMOR, AND JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF SENSUAL SEX. I JUST COULD NOT STOP READING THIS STORY, IN FACT I READ IT TWICE. MAYBE YOU CAN REVISIT THIS STORY AND CARRY ON.

my gosh thank u so much for writing and posting this. I rly loved this story, actually cried a few times while reading, poor katrina :(

your characters are rly well developed, I especially loved their backstories and how they tie in to explain the state of jake and kat's relationship. jake and kat are rly interesting and unique characters, poor bbies. your story was rly emotional and i feel so invested in the two of them. did i say that i loved your story? hjnjhbhbhbjhbj

i'm not sure if you're going to be continuing this story, but i rly look forward to reading more chapters if you ever decide to continue!! can't wait

I have withheld comments on any of the chapters until I got to the end. This is a wonderful story, with a wonderful ending, one of the best I have ever read. The characters are terrific. The situations are amazing. The triumph of love at the end is so heartwarming.

Of course, it is too bad about poor Rhea. Maybe Jake will be OK with Kat going to visit her from time to time.

This was such a good story, read through all chapters in the past few days and loved it! Hope to see more, if you're still updating!

Enjoyed this story a lot. Excellent work!

Light-hearted sex involves laughter, giggling perhaps, caresses, and huge silly smiles. Not face-slapping. That's just more pain.

I lived this story. Haven't been a reader of this site for years like most, maybe only 6 months or so. Started going through all your stories but am hoping you can find time to finish this one off.

This whole series was great and i think the dark theme and some sort of mystery that it had made the story more enjoyable

Now, I literally almost NEVER comment or praise any stories on this site because most of them are cringe-worthy and screwed up fetish stories with a few good stories scattered in the trash. This is one of them.

I mean, it’s by no means a PERFECT story, but it’s still a cut above some of the rambling fantasies and incoherent erotica on this site, in terms of grammar, storyline, character-building and conclusion.

So, I really liked this story. It was racy at times, granted, but there were enough honestly heartfelt moments between Katrina and Jake that was enough to elicit the same kind of feeling you get when you watch a romantic movie in me.

Solid 8/10. It was enough to get me to turn around and honest-to-goodness consider my prior indifference to romance stories on this site, even if it was a tad cliched and cheesy at times.

You ended the story perfectly. I love how she lead him around breaking him out of his shell.

Nice story. Most of the story lines got tied up except for the phsycopatic billionaire whom Katarina contacted in thr beginning. I know it's been years since this series was written, but it would be nice if you could write one more chapter to conclude that story line.

Light-hearted Sex?

Nope, I don’t think so. Her actions aren’t congruent with her words. Jake is correct, he’s normal and boring, Katrina craves wild and uncontrollable. Though she claims conventional is what she desires, Katrina slaps him for simply pointing out an obvious truth; slaps him again for his hesitation submitting to her desires. That’s not exactly the most loving response, nor is it showing any respect for Jake’s preferring intimacy in more private locations.

This is her idea of a normal relationship? Most girlfriends don’t insist on sex in the bushes in a public park nor do they slap their loved one’s face over some misunderstanding. Her disregard of personal boundaries and absence of mutual respect is completely in the character of that reckless and self-destructive girl who is supposedly gone. It would have been disconcerting if Katrina had gone all lovey-dovey and giggly. Hope Jake has his seatbelt fastened for the roller coaster ride ahead!

This was a somewhat bleh ending to really good series. Her slapping him was a big red sign of trouble. Honestly, the overall series would have been better without the last page.

Such a shame you couldn't be bothered to finish this.

great story really enjoyed it 5 stars