by Seattle Zack
I very much enjoyed this story. I hope that you decide to continue this story eventually. I think it would make a thrilling series.
Very well written. Very exciting. I really liked the character of Jack....cool, suave, laid back, and very sexy.
This was a beautiful work of literary art , I've never read anything better . Thank you for sharing your passion for writing with us
hey seattle.. good job! there are very few stories in here i actually like to come back to and read over & over, but this one does it. very nice.