All Comments on 'Liz's Revenge Ch. 02'

by Wolfie39

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dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
Why?

I thought the first part was better. Are you planning on a part three?

pubelesspubelessabout 20 years ago
great

Loved both parts please continue with this erotic master

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more

please continue with this great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great story!!!! Keep writing

That was a great story! It is all I have thought about for days. I love it all!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
You should have

stopped after part 1. This part was not very good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
First Chapter Good, Second Not So Much

I think you said everything you had to say about this prize trio in Chapter 1. This addition, with its cheesy pregnancy plot device, is not up to your usual standard.

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 12 years ago
No rating given.

I don't give bad ratings, I just don't give a rating to bad stories. This second chapter was crap, I just skimmed the last half. Macabre and preposterous and NOT entertaining. I will not be reading any other parts. Good luck to you, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Another failed author

When you don't finish stories you get a "1" only because a "zero" rating is not possible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Another unfinished pile of manure

Don't bother reading this crap. it isn't complete.

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