All Comments on 'Lizzie'

Great Story. Well written and very sexy...

a fucking and sucking of a different kind! Loved it! Wish I could experience this with a man...

Great writing, believable and so enjoyable. Thanks!

sensational - not really a fetish of mine (glad that the title didn't give anything away) but nevertheless found it highly erotic

Nice premise,

But the sex is sooooooo boring.

Needed much more in the way of foreplay/preliminaries.

Needed more dialog about her breasts. Did he like them? Why? Was he a breast man? Dod he like them big? Small? All?

Did sucking her milk out get him all hot and bothered? Did he have to masturbate? How often? What did he imaging doing to/with her breasts while masturbating?

Three stars.

LOVE the picture you painted of her fantastic body...and what a great thank you she gave him...!

AND just noticed there's a CH 02-oh boy!

easy 5/fav