All Comments on 'Lolita'

I like your overall concept, but your prose is very choppy and confusing. It's like the skeleton of a story that needs a bit of fleshing and building.

You have great promise, keep it up. This site needs less first person bad penthouse type letters, and some actual stories like you are doing.

This is actual literature. This isn't a stroke story, this is a real short story about human attraction and interaction, and I'm glad I stumbled across it.