by wantsomefun1951
What if we could go back and change some of the decisions we made when we were young? How would our lives have changed? That wonderful girl I loved then, would she be my wife now? Perhaps your story answers those questions.
Great story. Good luck in the contest.
Life - what an adventure, hmm?
I love the way you time-check through to today, after plenty of uninhibited detail about your first summer.
I'm watching for more from you, NICEly done!
–WI–
> The one that got away from me was a girl named Loni.
Nicely told tale of love, careers, disappointments, and re-found love. Well done!
Have been on this site for at least 8 years. This is the first time a story has brought me to tears! OMG, great story!