All Comments on 'Looking Back'

A mess of a story the reality of which might be more common in the world than we would like to think. Seriously though, who comes up with the idea of a grandma performing oral sex on a grandson! That's so out of the box twisted. Geeze! Does the Stangster just roll multi sided die to determine random variables the enter the plot paths? Still 5 stars. Hard to imagine a grandfather denying bone marrow to a grandson.

The comments calling Ken a douche are just a bunch of jumped up inbreds that can't the problem with seeing your partner fucking your grandchild.

H'wats wrong with him h'wy'd he just run out on his family that betrayed him? Wish you cunts well in your recovery from your lobotomies. Ken and Kate are the only innocent people in the family. Dylan was a piece of shit because Matt was a piece of shit because Mattie was a piece of shit. Fuck 'em all except Kate he should have stayed in contact with her because she didn't do anything wrong.

Ken is as one commenter put it, a douche. But lets face it, being a nice guy got him a whore who was being fucked by his best friend and grandson behind his back, while trying to justify what she did by calling him boring and making everyone think he was the bad guy. His own people called him a monster so he decided to act like one. Maddie is evil and deserved what she got, as did Dylan.

All that happened was the only reason Miranda is alive right now. Without that, she'd suffer a fate she didn't deserve. Nicely written, SS06

5 stars

Just stupid.

Ken is a major douche bag. I really hate these stories where the guy runs away and doesn't tell anyone why and then gets all upset that people are mad at him. Like, what do you expect Einstein? Also, the grandma fucking was absolutely rotten. Stang deserves a dickpunch for that.

Yup!!! 'Nother really good one!

This author's cheating wives do so for the most screwed up reasons. What Asad, dark, twisted mess.

It's a good story and well told, but it's awfully dark. I don't think I'd call it enjoyable as much as interesting.

Some weird stuff. Very messed up people. Dylan was an asshole. Maddie like many LWs from this author had some crazy reasons to cheat especially at her age. Whatever.

I suppose A story is really good if it instils anger and such strong feelings as A result!

Dazzy D

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4 Stars on a solid story . I also would have passed on the looser grand kid . .. I have a friend who has a very rare blood type . He always makes sure that the hospital has 4 pints on hand in case of an emergency . He also donated blood to a guy about 200 miles away . That way he will have a fighting chance if he gets hurt

I expect twisted from this author. This story took it to another level on several fronts. There were only 3 likable characters in this story and two of those three were severely flawed in their own way.

Need to NUKE Miranda's hometown, it seems completely peopled with the scum of the earth who reduce a loving, innocent, hopeful girl to the " town whore" .

Though I've met truly good people in my existence, I still vote the human species as "Needs to be exterminated" for it's past and undoubted future offensive stupidity. The ratio of decent folk to useless turds is just to damn high, consider it a failed experiment.

Stangster loves him some whores 😂 imagine fucking some chick that had fucked literally 100's of other Guys talk about a Mind Fuck😳

N f...ing good story.Always like the happy endings. Who cares about a few gramatical mistakes n world class nascar drivers used to b called stock car racing anyway when the sport was great. Restrictor plates n stupid rules ruined a great sport. Waste of time watching. But i digress great job it was enjoyed n appreciated.

Average for SS06.

Fucked up people? Yes

Poor decision making? Yes.

Ridiculous turn of events? Yes.

Totally idiotic people , getting what they deserve? Yes.

ENTERTAINING? Yes, of course—it’s SS06.

One fucked up family. Kate threw it away with a stupid ploy, rather than telling her husband she needed more of his attention, Miranda had a rough life and survived the evil, mean, brutal behavior of the human race. Did you know that the only living thing on earth that rapes is/are humans. Thankfully she was rescued by a decent human. Maddie and Dylan were the lowest pieces of shit that ever lived. Matt just a big old dum ass. Ken was the Saint. Some grammatical errors but a great and entertaining story.

It seems that most people that just trash other people's stories, seem to never have written any stories themselves. I have never written but i try to be objective and give advice at my personal level. I found this story entertaining, creative and it held my attention. I also find the story needs better proofreading, there were spelling and grammar problems, see I'm not trashing on anyone. I do wish i have the bravery and skill to write something worthy of submitting here. Be good to each other. Thanks again.

As a "World famous NASCAR driver". The world doesn't give a shit about nascar, beyond joking about "Turn left and accelerate". What you should have said was "Famous in a few states", nascar driver.

Loved that all the assholes got what they deserved.

Worthless pandering

I WANTED TO GIVE IT A FIVE, EXCEPT IT IS THE MOST DESPICABLE BUNCH OF VERMIN EVER AND DESERVING OF A ZEROZEROZERO.

Again you are an outstanding author. Great story.

Unfortunately many of your protractors are not looking for entertainment. This is a really great story, well written, a little poorly edited but very entertaining. Keep it up.

This is one of the stupidest stories on here. You can't prevent divorce.

If Ken from Chicago (see preface) ever ended up reading this story, he probably regrets confronting SS06 with not writing enough stories about people over forty.

I wonder whether SS06 is vengeful enough to have written this one, with its' many disgusting aspects, primarily to make sure Ken felt that regret. 2 stars!

The Story is kinda good but, people who have been together so long should know how the other is going to react. Yes this is a story but, not really realistic.

4 stars, and if he had hit Maddie with the two by four when she got in the way of Will getting his ass kicked i would have given it 5 stars.

Read again. This is another great story about a strong man refusing to save the life of someone who has helped destroy his life. This betrayal is actually worse than the one in Hooked’s great story. A grandson and his grandmother is unbelievable.

Always like to see a man show some back bone and not back down from anything,Maddie and Dylan deserved what they got.

Always like your stuff. But wow. She is portrayed as such a stupid, selfish, narcissistic bitch that it's really hard to see how they could have had a happy marriage.

Rose-colored glasses are one thing. But his rose-colored glasses had to have had the power to bend his mind.

Sad that Miranda had that much of a life back in her home time, I feel that you took that a bit too far, just imagining that happening is heartbreaking...it also went too far that it also become unbelievable because even 1 person old/middle aged/responsible would of helped her or even given her some cash to move away.

Cheaters always follow the same lines because they get caught, when have you read a story where the woman cheats, accepts that they have been caught but also explains why she did it or what went in her mind when she was cheating? Never because the writers always follow the natural response they can see someone who gets caught will say, I can explain/It doesn't look the way you see it/I'm sorry/It was just sex etc.

Great story, my second time reading this.

loved the story, great happy ending for Miranda who had such an unfortunate life.

I like how Kate is such a complex character. She seems kind, down to earth and is objective about saving her son and I felt sad that she ended up the way she did. Then you think about it and she becomes a hypocrite. she's good at manipulating people with her smile. She played mind games with Matt. She abandoned Miranda with an excuse. And she's a objectively a shit parent with how Dylan turned out.

I haven't read this in LONG time. so I don't know where it's going, but given the time he comes in the house, it NEVER occurs to her that he might have seen her, so that maybe she shouldn't flat-out lie to him?

"man loved her so much that he got insanely angry at the thought of her with someone else?"- It wasn't the THOUGHT of her with someone else, it was the FACT of it.

As usual, a SUPPOSEDLY intelligent woman doesn't talk to her husband about her issues, just handles it in the worst possible way. Then, when presented with blackmail, doesn't tell the little shit to go to hell.

Why do they always say it was ONLY sex? What else is cheating if not sex?

I thought that what Will said about Chelsea's sex drive was going to turn out to be a lie!

I'm sure Matt and Kate's divorce was caused by their arguments over the separation that Maddie caused.

"after forty years together you should have been willing to..." - After 40 years together SHE should have been willing to come to him with her problems.

I don't believe that the treatment is a "sure-fire cure." I don'i think there's such a thing with cancer. Even his brother wasn't "cured," just was in remission for a number of years.

Long winded and over the top.

Great story. Maddie was one messed up, cheating bitch and Dylan was her male equivalent. Hard to believe he didn't kill them all when he caught them. Great ending too, with the 70 year old hooker.

But excellent none the less. You always deliver. As reliable as a Ford. 7 stars (I can't count ) and worth the read. The Bear approves.

The BEAR

To a couple of comments: He didn't know about her 'medical condition' until they all came begging on his doorstep so there was no way it was a factor when he caught her cheating. Nice try on vilifying him and excusing her being a cheating slut for a long time, but no cigar. Besides a hormone imbalance does NOT cause her to lie and cheat with her husbands best friend. As for the comment about 'community property' people get this wrong it seems like every goddamned time! The last time I checked there were only nine (9) community property states with Alaska almost being one and Michigan AIN'T one of them. Stang lives in Michigan, I grew up and lived there for over fifty years and went through two divorces there. If you do the money thing Before divorce papers are filed with the court you are golden, at least when I did it. The first one tried to max out my credit card but I had already closed that door, she tried to clean out our bank accounts but I'd been there first. I spent a lot of the money but kept receipts and paid my attorney with the rest. Back then in my county I had to pay her attorney the first $100.00 dollars, in Washtenaw County it would have been $250.00, lucky me. She didn't know about the seven uncashed, weekly paychecks or the trunk full of bonds I had. First bottom line here; she cheated with a child molester, she filed for divorce, she had custody of our daughters, I paid every dime (plus) of ordered child support, I ended up with full custody once I found out what was going on with full support from my in-laws and she got away with NEVER paying a fucking dime of support. Every time I saw her she was dressed to the nines, the girls always had old clothes and hole in their underwear. So just where do you think the money was going? She kept shacking up with the pervert till the judge would order her out and that was last for a few seconds. I started buying them new clothes but if they wore them back to their mother I'd never see them again so I had to stop sending the new clothes back. Second bottom line here; if you don't know what you are talking about shut the fuck up. Someplace else I commented on what would have happened to those two pieces of shit if he had actually done anything to my girls but luckily he didn't have enough time before it came to light so I won't 'spain it here, Lucy. Second divorce was at the very minimum 90% my fault but at least I didn't leave my two little girls with someone I knew was a pervert while I worked nights.

The first thing I enjoyed in the story was the 2x4 outside the barn and the lawnmower gas, no happy cuckold here. After that I enjoyed meeting Miranda till I read her back story and that gave me another reason besides Woody fucking Hayes to hate Ohio. The lady turned out to have I big brass, pair and I gotta love that. No matter what neighbor, a good story, and fuck that little shit Dylan. I wouldn't have gone to visit him other than to say 'fuck you' and I sure as hell would not have attended his funeral unless my bladder was full. Signed: BTW

Your story is good and is some what different in one respect. When the wife found that she had a real medical condition her husband of forty years didn’t care because his feelings were hurt so it looked like he really didn’t care about her. In most cases a real medical condition would have saved her ass but, not this story. You have to look at this being a story and having a slant in the favor of the character the writer liked.

If there was a real medical reason she may have had no control of the reason for her action or wrong actions.

Yes the grandson and his best friend should have said something to him about what was going on with her to her spouse but? If the medical condition had been Cancer it would have mattered but, the medical imbalance was treated like a bad decision.

Overall the writing was good and made it seem the husband was wronged. If written the right way anything could be made to seem okay when its not. The right idea but, wrong action it made the wife a victim not the way Miranda was but, a victim just the same and writer you had good intentions but, was short sighted to me.

It was good he didn't risk his health for that shitstain Dylan. Nice happy ending for the good guys and the bitch got burned... Perfect!

Actions have consequences

Dylan fucked his grandfather over, and never bothered apologizing

He had a chance to change, but remained nothing more than a spoiled ass punk

He chose, and he chose poorly

Good story enjoyed

The last chapter could’ve been titled “be an asshole live as a asshole”.

Now every once in awhile I run into a story where the husband doesn’t fall for the I’m sorry crap and actually throw that whore of a cheating wife under a moving bus... again an excellent story.

But a bad ending. I thought he would do the marrow transplant for Kate if not his grandson. Life or death issues tend to get people over the top on many things. I feel sorry for Kate and think our protagonist is a bit of a dickhead. Outside of this, it was a great story.

He just doesn’t always put it on lit anymore. If you check out storiesonline.net you’ll see the newer stuff.

Story was good. Not my first time.

One of your more inconsistent efforts, but still better than most around here. Just wish you could come back to give us some more new material.

So bad it must have been. Not a good person in the entire story.

Nice touch on the Danica name.

but who gives a fuck? Helluva yarn!

Thanks for sharing that.

Thank you for having the patience to work out all of the twists to a real.end.

Okay I get the reference about Danica Patrick. The Myranda section or introduction since this is a story we don't have to have all of the legal jargon be dead on. Even if they could all Rape and rules aren't followed, dirty cops, corrupt family members and just stupid people. WAKE THE FUCK UP even look at a little TV if there a suspicion of rape they check to see if a rape kit was even collected.

Good story, nice link to real life at the end. I didn't see where his last name was Patrick but,good anyway

just excellent .

Just silly

Loved your story till you came to the Miranda part. She had (you could say one whole chapter) To tell her cousin her excuse for her whoring ways. When a rape or molestation is reported, the police and hospital have a rape test kit. A chemical analysis is done and any residual drug is going to be detected. Ok? Mirandas story is so full of holes. You left your wife cause she fucked two men, but yet you fell in love with Miranda after she had been with a whole town including her cousins and uncles And apparently the next town over, Ergo the train that was going to happen. Also as you handed the divorce papers to Maddie you told her that she knew how to read since she had been a teacher But at the end you say she had never worked. You left to many holes in your story. I´ve known girls that have been abused and they didn´t go and fuck all the males in their family plus the whole town. To be honest. I loved your story and to me it was starting to get interesting til you brought Miranda into the picture from there it seemed to go downhill. Now. If you had made it belivable that would be another thing. Also. Even if your wifewhad never worked outside of the marriage. she worked for forty years to make your house a home for you, therefore community property. Sorry, you can´t have your cake and eat it too.

I tried to get into this story but I gave up and took the shortcut after page 4 I went to last page and got the end! ! Anyway I still love your stories. But not this one 40% OF READING ENJOYMENT! ! Love you all GREG! BYE!

no storms will ever change the decision, TK U MLJ LV NV

it certainly could happen. If her hormones were fluctuating as much as was claimed she certainly could have had a hot pussy at that age. And her mouth would work at any age. Now, if I was 20 years old I would not want to fuck my 70 year old grandmother and that's for sure, but it would be possible, physically. And some 70 year old men are known to be sexually active. Now me, I would rather be sexually active with a 40 year old babe, but that's not going to happen in this world.

Funny comment coming from our friend in Poland.

to a point,we are reading about a couple of senior people past 65.In the end they were 70,please have a little mercy on peoples intelligence,a threesome in a garage ?? at that age ? seriously ?

I have the greatest respect for SS06 and his ability to write exellent stories but this way over the top unless it is some kind of black humour

What else could you have chosen? I guess all these stories are over the top, but that was a nice touch...

What a mess! This story pulls the veil off the fantasies we tell ourselves about being normal. In the beginning, everything seemed great, then that veil was peeled away and reality was right behind it! People suck!

Maddie broought all the trouble on herself and tore the family apart. Some of the statements she mad(you were the best) she let her mouth overload her ass and like she said she wanted to try something different and as far as Will being his best friend with friends like him you dont need enemies. Matt the son took Maddies side not knowing the facts. Really the only decent people in the story was Ken,Kate and Miranda. There was always an excuse for Maddie first it was boring sex than next it was a medical problem a chemical embalance. The one thing that I cannot understand after Will finally passed on all of a sudden Maddie was cured..So what happened a complete family was ruined and guess what it happens every day either the Husband or Wife decides to try something /someone new and gets caught and if they have children they are the ones that get truly hurt.

I dont know if there is a sequil to this story maybe thre should be on to see what happens down the road. It is in my favorites but it just amazes me how stupid people can be Have they ever heard of talking about things?

Ron Texas

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

A troubled story about troubled people. Maddie just had to try someone new out and got caught. She did not loose 40 yrs of marriage she threw it away like last nights trash. Matt the son was a jerk jealous of his wife and father for no reason and his son was a spoiled brat. Kate the daughterinlaw was the only one besides Ken on that side of the family that had good common sence. Miranda was used abused and deserted by her family the only good thing to ever happen to her was Ken and there baby.OK I said my piece this story is in my favorites and I will read it again. Wonder what happens to Ken,Miranda and there

child. Would be nice to read more about them. To bad Maddie just destroyed the family no getting around it.

Ron

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Ok, normally your stories are well written, but this one was total gibberish.

Most of your stories get a 4* rating from me but this struggles to reach 2*

Stang - Thank you for writing this, I have read it once before. You are in the top five of my favorite writers on Literotica, probably first or second. Please keep writing.

The characters were lined up well. On the bad side Maddie Will and Dylan and the good side Ken Miranda and Kate..... The jury is still out on Matt....Not much mention on Chelsea. I found the story quite entertaining and I couldn't wait to get to the next paragraph. I've not been disappointed in reading this author's stories, so far. Of course, any one of the characters could've been modified to bring a surprise element to this story but they remained true to form. As usual, I rated this author a five stars. Thank you for your effort.

Asshole, you don't know shit. And you drive a jellybean Prius.

Danica has more talent than half the Nascar field. Notice that she's been near the middle of the 43 car field at the end of each season she's driven. That beats out a good 20 to 30 of the testosterone crowd. She's a wheelbarow more balls than some anonymous 'bottom' such as you.

Danica Patrick sucks. Kyle Petty said it best, the silly bitch wouldn't have a ride if she wasn't female. This isn't to say that there can't be a woman out there who could hold her own in Nascar someday, but that woman isn't Danica.

I really liked this story. Ken was too easy and didn't want to hurt his son and daughter-in-law. Something like this was enough to ruin the family, if Ken was ruined and disheartened he should have spread the misery and given his wife what was coming to. Some people are just too nice.

Maddie cheated and never told anyone why Ken left. As for as Kate Miranda and Ken they were the only decent people in the story. Different type of story but good as for as Dylan a spoiled brat.

Ron cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Stanstar was drunk when he wrote the story.

The only innocent in this besides the father was Kate and miranda. Dylan and Matt were both shits in my opinion. The wife should have just signed the paper's and let it go. After 40 years she should have known he wouldn't stand for it.

Well, good to see your getting back to form. Good Read, but check your editing.

Thanks.

Do you need a new editor or do you just ignore the advise they give you?

Another 1 star. Please work on fixing your stories. Thanks and please keep trying.

It's easy to blame a grandson but the failings of a son reflect the father's failings. The Martians did not raise Matt did they?

Hey Annon "Soccer not a major sport" sorry to burst your bubble, but in the US in the 1960's and early 1970's soccer was a one or two week event that happened in Phys. Ed. in high school. There were no Soccer teams, it wasn't on TV, and it wasn't in Sports Illustrated or Sport Magazine. There was no internet, no sports cable TV shows, no You Tube, and only three channels of Network TV, and really nothing to show any sports in other countries except for maybe a news bite or the Olympics. So for a man in this age group at that time in his life, yes, Soccer was not a major sport. How do I know, I was there in the 60's and 70's and until we had Soccer in Phys. Ed. I had never heard of it!!!

Wow! It has been a long time coming. A SS06 story with thinking women and men. I guess that means no mentally challenged women. Also no genius, emotionally altogether men.

Everyone made their mistakes. Large and small, they hurt others and hurt themselves.

Talk about some original plot twists! This is the first time I can say, I believe this SS06 story should have been longer, lol. Maybe more of the meeting between Ken & Miranda. Or going back to the beginning more about the close relationship between Ken and Will.

Hold on SS06, I know, I know you can't win. We complain your stories are too long and now about this one being too short, HA ha ...

Anyway I gave you 5*s. It reminds me of your stories from 2011. Original creative plot and great emotional impact.

Thank You very much. And please, keep writing.... Maybe a Star city story, someday.

By the way my condolences that you and your Kitty Kat are no longer together. Breaking up is always painful, whatever the reasons. Good luck

AMerryMan

A good story, well done tale. Thanks for posting!

Fucking misogynistic fucktard. He doesn't know any other word than misogynistic, misogynistic, misogynistic, misogynistic. Broken fucking record.

Last time I saw him he was lapping cum from Laurel's tepid hole.

ss06 ,i think u are amazing , you contribute alot of material on a regular basis , of a consistantly very high standard when compared to other Authors on the site.

sometimes i wonder wether you are rushing some stories to get them posted faster, it's as if you feel duty bound to get them finished & move on to the next one.

having said that , i did really like this tale , i think i understand that you deliberately over-egg(exaggerate) the characteristics , to really hammer home your points.

Yes this does sometimes detract from the tale.

but .. considering the genre / topics of your stories i can see that really laying it on as heavily as possible does have it's merits.

extremely intelligent pple can make some really dumb mistakes

after making said mistakes, they can & often do act in the most foolish / stupid ways.

extremely intelligent & savvy pple can be easily deceived by those they love & trust

having been deceived in that way , they can & often do become a walking train wreck.

when they get their sh*t together , they can & do react in a variety of extraordinary & drastic ways.

i think thats what the Author is attempting to convey in his writing , i realise that on occasion it is way over the top ... but how else do you get those points accross to an often obtuse & dense Audience.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

Soccer not a major sport? It's the #1 major sport in the world! You Americans think the world revolves around what you like best. Soccer is the #1 sport in the world by far....and it's not even close.

SS06, I'm really surprised that you would have such a long story printed without you at least doing a little proof reading. The story is full of missing words and typos.

Also your characters were unrealistic and wooden feeling. I agree that you can do much better. A few rewrites and this could have been a very good story.

Sorry, Charlie

....well, but with some regret, I have to task you with trying to write your female lead characters as something more than clueless morons.

It is a conflict that a man can love a women so deeply, so unreservedly for so long, and not be pissed at her even once for being so thick. You write them like they're freakin' AWSOME smart girls until they get caught, then they are suddenly clueless and can't see what all the fuss is about.... Really? REALLY?

Then you crutch them up on the "crazy with hormones" defense. That just further reduces them to silly, stupid bimbos. And they never seem to be willing to talk to their "soul mate" before doing precipitous things. These are tawdry devices.

This is beneath you.

Try writing something where the woman actually knows what she's doing, what the risks are and simply can't bring herself to be either accountable or faithful. She can finally, honestly acknowledge what she did and fight for her marriage, which will fail, due to the length, depth and breadth of her depravity.

Or try addressing the smart, shark-bitch type that just uses a man, drains him of any and every resource she can, then does her level best to destroy him before moving on.

The tricky bit then is to see how he can, finally understanding her true nature, get the best of her in that final fight to end their sorry charade and regain his badly damaged self respect.

I'm hungry for something outside your usual storyline, because almost everything from you in many, many months has followed the same, trite formula.

You're better than that! Come on!

If you are aware of these authors tendencies in their writing, why are you tormenting yourself by reading it? It sounds counter intuitive for someone to read writing by an author he does not like.

Bet you a closet BTB reader who enjoys the old man's writing and Mustangs.

Good story Stang but a 4 star for this one comepare to some of your older writings.

A famous singer in Brazil(Joao Gilberto) had a child with his biographer when he was 72 in 2003.She was married and it was a big scandal.He is still alive at 83.

It's not too common for a grandson to be fucking his grandmother, especially if she is not consenting to the act. There are too many ways for her to put a stop to it - one being the claim the grandson raped her and his claim the neighbor was involved was just a diversion. The kid was on the outs anyway and would be ousted from the family. But let us not let reason prevail.....

The one true decision made in this story was that grandpa said, essentially, "fuck him. The little bastard fucked my wife, his grandmother. I have no love for the little shit. Let him live what cards life dealt him without my help." A true sentiment - let the asshole suffer the consequences of his choices.

Aww, I forgot! It's okay for you anon idiots to flame every single cuckold story that gets posted and threaten to murder the authors and somehow their fictional characters as if they were real people. But if anyone dares to question one of the big, mighty patron saints of BTB readers than they are taking things too seriously and have serious mental issues.

And who said I read this story? I've read enough of Stang's stories to know exactly what happened and, unlike his fans, I didn't rush in to one bomb it. I just pointed out that he hasn't written an original story in years, he has some serious issues with women, his first wife probably left him due to him constantly lusting after younger girls and possibly his daughter, and that he goes on /way/ too long. Also he has shitty taste in cars, but that's another issue altogether.

Last time I checked you have not written or posted anything in Literotica.'Except of course if you include the dozens of negative rants you post in the comments section. FLC, are you learning impaired? If not why would you read and comment on a story you KNOW you will not like. Is that not the definition of insanity? As for this story nice job Stang better than your last few efforts FLC ! Unbunch your panties and relax Fiction moron fiction Got it?

Yes anon, but that would require someone to be writing these stories who isn't a bitter, misogynistic old man who thinks all women are lazy, fat, good for nothing whores if they aren't twenty years younger than him and begging to fuck him. He writes these male characters who are so impossibly good and kind and pure and these women who are impossibly evil and wicked and stupid, yet it's clearly the men in his stories who are always ending up fucking some younger woman. I'm guessing that's the reason his own marriage broke up, and this is some revisionist history to justify it.

Also, it would require an author capable of thinking outside of the exact same boilerplate story again and again and again, and since Stang has about five templates he just fills in over and over with a few variables (does he fuck his own daughter in this one, does he blame the wife for being raped, does her murder her and then sit around being congratulated for it?) I doubt you'll ever see anything different from him.

@ Statistic Anon Accordings to the statistic data: 55% of the married women had minimum 1 extramarital event in their life and the husbands are 60% minimum 1 extramarital affair in lifetime. This numbers are contrary to your opinion. The cheating wives who want to sit on two horsebacks (husband and lover(s)) or to use an accidental opurtunity for cheating are same common if only they are majority as those wives who change their first husbands to newer husbands. So SS06 please write about your wife chararacters without any hesitation, because they are not so rarly in our countries as this Anon wants to show me. But sometimes your wife characters could get more IQ..............

Sugna: At 90+ my granddad could CARRY his great grandson around a shopping mall. At 100+ he was making transcontinental trips - alone.

Annette74: "Great story and so believable." Believable?? Really!!!

Anon: "Stang has, unfortunately, gone "down hill."" Concritic123 put it well in his comment titled Another boilerplate.. Unfortunately these are the two comments I most agree with, :-(

Statistically, it’s usually the husbands who cheat most often and they cheat out of lust, while wives who cheat usually do so to find better mates. Wives who do cheat aren’t usually lazy and stupid as StangStar06 always depicts them. Rather, they are hard working and ambitious, and they expect their husbands to be at least as successful as they are. Unfortunately, their husbands turn out to be unskilled, lazy, and ill mannered losers who can’t hold onto their jobs, which is the exact OPPOSITE of how Stangstar06 always depicts the husbands.

StangStar06’s stories would be much more consistent with reality if he switches the slut role from the wife to the husband. It is also ironic that SS06’s high valuation of money earning potential is what generally causes women to cheat. If SS06 is a married woman, it is highly probable that he would be the cheating spouse, statistically speaking.

If the previous poster is calling Ken an asshole, the previous poster has his/her head stuck up his/her ass.

yep he is an asshole

I like your stories, some things may not fit within what may be legal, but again they are stories of fiction. I never care weather things might or might not be, your stories are entertainment and that's why I read them. I would like shorter stories but I still read them all.

"I withdrew all of the money from the accounts and left her penniless. She got one more check before I removed her name from my retirement account as well.

It seemed heartless and cruel, but I enjoyed it. She showed up at my house, screaming at Randa and me, so I had her arrested. "

Of course, when this happens, Ken would probably be forced to pay at least as much if not more than he was voluntarily giving her. Especially as it would look to a judge that she was attempting to hold the marriage together and Ken took off to take up with a younger floozy.

Just my thought on the matter.

It was OK but like usual your stories are toooooooo Fucking long and full of bull shit.

......although I think you're going to need Jerry Springer sort this family out..... LOL