All Comments on 'Looking for Love'

You have made this Horny 'ol Sailor's evening a joyas one with this story. It was extremely well written, the words flowed, making it an easy read, and finally, it had a happy ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.

You seem to have the knack for coming up with these delightful romances. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

Boyd

with plenty of interesting details. However, I would work on your punctuation to eliminate excessive dashes and consider resubmitting this in the non-erotic category.

A well written story. I enjoyed it from the first sentence to the very last word. Thank you.

enjoyed the story. Thanks

This was very nicely done, a true love story. It was well written, flowed well, and kept up the interest. I felt like I had known both of them forever and even felt like their friend! Great job!

Two minor quibbles: When it switched to the dogs (which I enjoyed immensely - your dogs are great... mine is a white boxer, ugly as sin, but loveable!) the story just ended too fast. I wasn't ready for this! The second, and I probably shouldn't say this since you might actually be a marine (and probably bigger than me) paratroopers have a saying about marines; let's see... something about sweets, something about posterior, and ending with marines.

Is it okay to say "Airborne!" and the response be "Ooh-rah?" Nah! I didn't think so!

Anyway, great story, you have a nice way with words.

Outstanding love story---just my kind -- please keep up the outstanding work

Thanks,

Sam

I enjoyed this again, it's a shame you are no longer submitting stories.

I have read a number of your stories (all on Literotica) and you are generally a terrific writer -- your specialty definitely being romances - in that category you are simply a master.

If I have to be a little negative, your characters (whom I just love, of course) are too much larger than life. It would be nice to read about more reachable characters. BUT, this is a very minor objection.

I just love your stories!!!!!

Understand you like dogs, but give it a rest.

The title says it all dick wad.

I love this story as I do almost all of your work. One small quibble: it would take a gale strong enough to blow the sticks out of the boat to come anywhere close to putting a Morgan 41 on a plane!

I also liked your story a lot!

i enjoyed this story a lot

would have liked some of the 20 year gap filled in but i suppose that is being greedy

well written i enjoyed it.

The last page - with the dogs and the life they led after marriage was perfect -

You chose to expound upon your Chinook love and there was a beautiful section there - so real and true and visual - no doubt it could be from life as it occurred.

Awesome -

This story is OK! There is a but! Why do most authors finish the story covering 40yrs in one paragraph do you run out of ideas. Said that I have to say it's Fantastic in the beginning, middle some of the ending love you all! Bye.

One of my favorites of this author’s. Of course the fact that I’m a Marine too may have swayed my opinion just a little. Semper Fi.

for the last 55yrs+ I have had a number of dogs most were dogs thrown out on the street & some from the pound. my dad had his hunting dogs , but we weren't allowed to touch . after leaving home at 20 I made up for lost time . my late wife & I couldn't have children between her & I we lost 5 so dogs became ours.

A wonderful story ! 5+

Wonderful story

Awesome story! Totally beautiful!