- Incest/Taboo
- Looking Glass Rose
- Comments
All Comments on 'Looking Glass Rose'
by CalHollows
- 16 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoGreat story..... I'm sitting here wishing I was Jepp! Please continue on.....
watuneedalmost 13 years agoGreat story, I hope there is going to be another installment sometime soon
camstevens33over 12 years agoFantastic story here. I absolutely loved it. I don't care for wham-bam stories. The build-up is what makes it worthwhile. I also like your style of writing. Adds a bit of realism and insight to the characters, delving into their personalities. I'd really love to read more of this story. I'm hooked.
Anonymousover 12 years agoif you are going to write a story either make sure you finish it or keep it to yourself. this is in noway finished either finish it properly or delete it. this is totally unfair to the readers and you should be ashamed to have left it this way. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T START AT ALL. YOU HAVE TO EARN THE RESPECT OF THE READERS AND LEAVEING A STORY LIKE THIS DOESN'T DO IT YOU JUST LOSE RESPECT SO START WRITING.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis story was getting a decent build-up and you ended it abruptly. If this is the end of the story I am very dissapointed. Please finish this story as soon as possible or remove it from Literotica. Don't mind, I liked your initiative. But this kind of half-stories can irritate the readers a lot. I am telling this from a reader's perspective
toby9790over 12 years agoThis was a really good story, but you ended it in the middle of the story line. I hope you plan on finishing it, because it would be a shame to have such a good story unfinished like this. Please do the readers a favor and finish your story. Once you finish it, then I'll give you the five stars the full story deserves. toby9790
Anonymousabout 12 years agoHey that was a great story, a real love story, but like everyone else said, you need to finish it, i thought i was missing a page. please do so asap.
ChasBover 10 years agoFor those who complained about the unfinished nature of this work, yes, it could profit from a sequel; but... one can imagine all sorts of outcomes, if one isn't spelled out, and I like it that way. An interesting writing style, somewhat literary, but nicely paced and holding a reader's interest. I notice most CalHollows stories are gay, but he shows a rare understanding of the tragedy and glory of love, and I'd like to see more straight work from him - being an unrepentant hetero, myself. He does close blood so marvelously.
vividlyyoursover 9 years agoYou have an extraordinary talent for describing scenes without losing the focus on the characters. Good suspense instead of the usual banging-by-the-second-page stories we get. Nicely, nicely done.
