All Comments on 'Lord Melchior'

I really enjoyed this story and I hope you continue it !

Golly. That was FUCKING HOT. I'm too turned on to post anything more sensible that. lol

With a double egg inside me as I read your tale... I orgasamed for over 15 minutes !!! My god.. you are an AWESOME author !

I'm reading this story and all i can say is...wow. I felt every word and now i'm wondering if i could have taken such a night so well. I look forward to reading more of your stories

4.67-4.70? Something around there? Shrugs... it's different, and that's what matters. Well done.

Well written, highly erotic...very creative setup. It has potential and interest even without the sexuality of the piece. Very well done! (and it provided a hot climax, thank you!)

I love your use of retelling a story to get your story started . The benevolent but strict mentor type dom is a real turnon for me and im very glad you write him so well. Your vocabulary is outstanding.

Very creative and very well written. The author accomplished a teasing buildup to the climax of the story in a very effective manner. I loved ancient setting, and the author's vivid description of the action in the tale. Truly enjoyed it!!

I have soaked my vibrator as i read ever wonderful detail, write more PLEASE

I really liked the Lord Melchior story and think that the concept has a lot of potential. I was wondering if there is going to be follow up to this one, because I would love to read it. Hope you’ll write some more soon.

I do hope you are going to follow with more adventures, this one was great.

Perhaps my favorite story on this site. I hope you write more!

Great story,so well written and very hot! Loved it!

Loved it. Hope you write another . great sex very hot

Straightforward and wonderfully written, well done! :)

Oh my god ... more ... over and over again.

....enough said

mmm! I creamed my panties!

Kudos to the Man who can make a gal soak her seat from reading a story. You're an extremely gifted writer able to evoke vivid powerful erotic images in one's mind...Bravo!...More!

That was probably one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time. Thanks! And more, please!

This story was awesome! The best I've yet read on this site. It was a little slow getting started, and I wish it was longer. You must right much much more. I wouldn't be opposed to your narrator getting nailed either.

New here, so it's one of the first I've read, let me say.... it will be a hard one to beat. sooooo exotic

Although I've never enjoyed reading (or even hearing) about anal, it seemed only appropriate here. Although it was against her will, they seemed respectable in that they were gentle with her and that the "master" explained everything that she would be feeling. Great story, great attention to detail, and I'll make sure and check out any other submissions you nay have on here.

-Sara

Lovely, absolutely lovely. Lucky Rasha. Part 2? Or anymore tales? Pretty please...

One of the better tales on here--I feel exhausted/satisfied afterwards!

You hit several genres here all at once: first time, group sex, anal, and non-consent/reluctance. And you hit the high notes of each category - very impressive. The best non-consent/reluctance stories embody a gradual lessening of resistance into acceptance, and then enjoyment of the act/full participation. If done poorly, it can seem totally unrealistic. Very well done here :)

This story was hot, hot, hot!!!! Your writing style is incredible.

I agree with a couple of other comments I've read... to read this and cum from that alone... I do indeed want more. Can Lord Melchior join me in my chambers? Thank you and I look for more from you.

.....the things that turn us on! Outstanding read, loved every phrase and yet, got a lot of pleasure.

That was a very hot read! Sex was fantastic. Great description on the scenes and emotions. Hope there is chapter 2.

I loved this story. I've loved all your work - but this is by far my favorite. Any chance we can have more of these short stories in addition to your novella work? Either way, many, many thanks for sharing.

this had everything i could possibly want...perfect

I absolutely love this story. This is by far the best I have ever seen here. Perfect length, extraordinary descriptions, fantastic writing skills.

I stumbled upon this story by accident... thank god for accidents. It was wonderful; the characters richly textured (which is rare in erotica), the language hot, the tenderness and use working hand in hand in regard to the taking of Rasha... just a phenomenal read. Thank you for posting it.

I loved this...Keep up the good work

One of the hottest stories I've read on this site. Hope you summit alot more...great writing.

Three orgasms! It was amazing but I was very much hoping that Zec would have done something with the Lord. Hope you write something with guy on guy bc just hinting at the possibility was making me hot!!!

I absolutely loved the 'Master' character - very well drawn. The attention to detail was delightful, though I must agree that a little guy-on-guy would have been icing on the cake. Beautiful work, thank you very much!

You should write more of this story. and have Zaccheus be taken by master!

Oh my god. I just...I can't. God that was hot.

loved it

this was such a hot story! i hope someday you will write more to this story. i would love to see where this would go. congratulations on your published works and good luck for your future.

That was so wild. I was throbbing and.....

Like it.

i read your story "down" before this and was blown away by it.Then read this and im still hot and bothered after finishing it! I think its great the way you can take on different genres and still be awesome, although i rather think you have left this website but never mind. CHEERS

This story got me so wet, wish I was in it

What a lovely story… Thank you.

Please continue this story!! I think that Lord Melchior is so hot. He got me off in 5 min.

What a night, poor girl.

This story was perfection, from beginning to end.

they raped gangbanged her but still it was quite gentle w/o much manhandelling or abusing her they had their pleasure but they paid attention to hers too

best triple penetration i ever came across

although i ve mixed opinion about first time anal by a dp but still she felt pleasure from her pussy so it might have reduced her anal pain

i love the bath scene by multiple guys to him

also is the msster interested in boy love with the main guy