All Comments on 'LOrd of VEgas Ch. 11'

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TRav2407TRav2407over 13 years ago
Nice!!

I like the direction you have taken this story. Personally i would like to thing Aphrodite as a nice goddess, but the way u turned her was interesting. Great buildup to a showdown between the goddess and.... well lloyd is sort of a demigod himself, jsut not aphrodites son. You could always do a story a long time into the future and reference this as an epic kind of like the Illiad or Perseus's epic

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
this is good

Nice surprise that last one left me confused as to just what the hell he could do

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I am working on a few stories, including a draft of a seemingly long-awaited sequel to my summer camp story. Stay tuned, and as always, feedback is appreciated.

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