by mvicious
a few editing errors here and there, decent descriptions, lacked context though - no idea who these people are so why should we care about them?
It was more like a snapshot than a story - I enjoyed it... but then, two guys and a girl, not to mention someone watching always makes me hot...
Just a plain cheating story. What kind of sick people write and enjoy this kind of trash.
you will stay, and read, drawn by the description, of watching, of being cucked, of self-loathing, humiliation, finally you can spank, then comment in self-disgust. you will never go away, you are the wannabe cuck, read on cucky
when the description said, "I watched my wife," but I decided that didn't necessarily guarantee that hubby would be a little wanker. So, in the hopes Hubby might find some balls, I waded on into the story. Now I'm knee deep in this slime and have no one to blame but myself. Oh well, I've learned my lesson well, "When you see the warning signs, watch your step!"
The husband should not be allowed to ride the bike, he should be in the kitchen in a dress.
Cock in vadge after cock in ass = painful vaginal infection. Not sexy. Thanks for totally killing the story. Obviously this was written by an oblivious asswipe.
the siren song to the wannabe cucks, in self-loathing they comment and curse the tale, but still they read, they wank, they dream of cuckoldry, of creampies, of sloppy seconds, they dream the dream of the cuck, watching their wife get fucked
You constantly wrote and by way of suggestion, that his wife cheating was not part of their life so...
...he wanted to go in and kill the guys...no?
The ending wasn't appropriate or fitting the characters or the story line, your choice 0f course.
ie" they locked eyes and she laughed at him - Nowhere did it suggest that they had past problems so...
he certainly doesn't need to try his luck at beating the guys, they'll probably destroy him so - how about, what if - he calmly, as possible, walks in, opens a beer and asks the guys if they wouldn't mind waiting a few minutes while his wife packs a few things so that she can leave with them. This - would fit your story.
Anyway, thanks, I enjoyed it until you didn't have him respond to her laughing at him!
Thanks!!!
this story is so hot. I want this to happen to my wife.
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sucks and whites in almost every story. I guess the author thought this sounded good when he wrote it.
so what's the story. If she would have locked eyes with me and laughed, that would have been bad news for her. What the hell is all these stories , hubby come home and finds his wife being fucked and he gets all excited and watches........What pure bullshit