All Comments on 'LoSa-MaSa'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Great writing, pace and climax...no pun intended..

Great writing and perfect pace. Was VERY turned on reading it, anticipating the final ending. Hope there's more to come!!

GoodWifeyGoodWifeyabout 20 years ago
Yes, I must admit you are right

That is just the way most men would choose a wife.

Let a bunch of other guys fuck her silly to see if she is sexy or not.

I can see it now where that would be the ideal start to a marriage.

Hahahahahahaha!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good Fantasy

Sure it's not realistic, but it is a great fantasy story. Good story line, very well drawn characters given the short piece. I enjoyed reading it.

Eric

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Just what every man wants to marry, a nasty whore. Maybe this cuck author, but no man.

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