All Comments on 'Losing It to Coach Brian'

I will be checking out part two soon!

PLEASE!!!!! Get part 2 on the net!!!!! My cock is so hard from reading part 1 I will just have to stroke it until cum squirts all over my computer screen! FUCK!!!!!!! You write very convincingly and make me want to look you up!!!!

Part 2!!! Part 2!!! Part 2!!! , lol...If you can't tell, I can't wait to read Part 2...

Anon, I run a 5.20 mile. So yes it is accurate that she ran a 30min 4 mile run.

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER??

After a hard workout and getting all sweaty, I don't want anyone's tongue near my vajayjay until I can wash it off! Guess that's just me.

Also, the pond is a mile around...she ran four laps in half an hour...that's some fast running, yes?

That's all I wanted to share.

I love the story so far -- and eagerly await the next chapter detailing their sexual adventures. If Brian is such a muscular guy (college owing experience) and older, can he have a nice growth of chest hair for Eliza to run her fingers through? That's what helps to make a man sooooo sexy! I love to see that detail included in the description of these guys -- a nicely haired chest, treasure trail, and pubic bush!

You're off to a good start. I like the story. Lot's of typo's though, more careful editing would make for an even better read. Keep at it! :-)

Nice beginning. Felt a little rushed toward the end ( the oral sex, of course lol) but waiting for next part.

Great first effort - don't stop!

Good start. A few forgotten words, but the brain read over the missteps. Over all very good. Please continue...

great start. please continue