All Comments on 'Lost at Sea Ch. 01'

It looks like you're off to a great start. I can't wait to see what direction you take this story and how you develop the characters.

It's a good start. I would only suggest to check through your grammar and spellings more thoroughly. Keep it up.

I would suggest that you make the paragraphs shorter. It's quite a strain to read on a laptop screen. Good luck with your story, it's off to a good start.

Loved it. Is this it? Its says chapter 1 people usally have chapter 2 by now.