by Ignoble
Don't understand why you are getting low scores for this story, loved it! I thought it was funny as hell and a great opener. I really hope you don't let the low score thus far keep you from writing more, because I for one would love to see what happens to these two. lol
Very clever, especially the punny names!
This is Douglas Adams meets Literotica.
There are so many possibilities that could spring from this beginning... Can't wait for the next couple of dozen chapters!
This sounds like an incredibly amazing story. Maybe a group of lesbian pirates will give them food in exchange for using them?