All Comments on 'Lost Kingdoms Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
this is awesome!

I think you caught the feeling of a mmo very well, the frustrations and feelings of a player used to fighting. I really want to know how this progresses, and the bit about the chick screaming really made it seem more believable for some reason.

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_eover 9 years ago
Outstanding!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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