All Comments on 'Lost Without You'

I love it!!!

Awesome story and the build up just makes it better. You have a few spelling and grammatical errors, nothing a quick proof read before posting wouldn't fix. Your character sketches are thorough and descriptive. From the point of view of a reader who enjoys being in the story, so to speak, I found the imagery and settings slightly nondescript. Nonetheless your style is creative and thorough and your ability to hold an audience, what I value most as a fellow writer, are unparalleled.

It's off to a great with a good hook at the beginning. Can't wait to see more.

Love the first chapter. Hope you post the next one soon.

i had my ipod on while i was reading this and Makin Good Love just happened to be playing at the same time! Love that song!

Part Two is coming/cumming soon??

Will there be a follow up?

just a little difficult to understand what it was all about, did they, did they not, do what?