All Comments on 'Love Comes to the Pool Party'

Your descriptions were so good I got a good mental image of what Kat looked like. And I doubt the departed wife would have minded what happened, if she loved her husband.

nice tale but it was rushed to much. more like a wham bam tale. not bad

for a one page tale.

For many widows and widowers this is the type of encounter that gets them out of their funk.

You're a talented writer, but this wasnt "romantic". I realize you tried to add it, but they barely even talked before they had sex. He can't "know she's the one" just by checking her out and fucking. Although the description was great, this story is not in the right category.

To short, needs more

A lovely short story. Sad about the loss of the first wife but these things really do happen. Enjoying most of your stories, not into (gay) but thank you for your efforts. Mel B known as Hornydevil47