by jack_straw
A great story line and well developed characters as well as the customary sex. A delightful read.
I loved this story. It had so much passion. You are a very talented writer and I hope to read more of your writings. It would be kinda cool if you wrote another story but one about Tom and his love life.
I really liked this story a lot. You should write more romance type stories. Keep up the great work.
You took your time, considered your characters and wrote with them in mind, rather than figuring out how to get them into the sack fast. Bravo! I know there are some who read other of your stories who might be disappointed that it's not 90 percent sex. But NO relationship is all about sex, not a lasting one at least. Thanks for your thoughtful creation.
...story. I was happy that eventhough the story was kind of rushed you still took your time with the story line and the characters. I thought that the story was excellent and just hope that you continue writing more romance stories.
Just what I like. A soft, sweet story people in love, who they are and how they got there.
Nice.
A romantic and erotic story, with a touch of drama for Charlie, but that served to find love with Danny.
I knew a little bad about Tom, who seems to have been left alone and without a partner.
Maybe there's another story about him?
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
To come back to us, stories like this are your niche. Signed: BTW
I agree with BTW, I've sampled different types of your stories - this is where you shine the most. I also hope you are still out there and resume writing. Thanks Jack
somewhere east of Omaha
The only negative in this good story was Tom!! That bastard was nearly salivating when he saw her naked body on the table during the attempted rape!!
Then when she is about to get married the bastard Tom expresses his feelings for her!!
Her kissing him was so unnecessary!!