All Comments on 'Love in the Eye of a Storm'

by toast37

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Totally Amazing!

One of the best I've read yet. You are a great writer. Thanks so much for this one!

madengineer3madengineer3over 15 years ago
Excellent!!!!!!

This is a wonderful story about two very decent young people. It is an excellent read. The treatment of the emotions is first class!

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 15 years ago
I enjoyed the story

You might want to look up hymen though. It's not found in the vagina but on the opening to the vagina. Great job though for only your second submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awesome

This story was excellent! The best I've read on here. Unlike most stories on this website, it focused very little on the sexual element, and mostly on the romantic and relationship aspects. Thank you so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

This is a really great story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good but

The ending was quick and it seemed rushed with very little detail with which made the beginning of your story great. Try to detail your endings a bit more. Other than that though great story

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