All Comments on 'Love Is A Silk Blindfold Ch. 06'

I don't get it. Jules is unhappy with his "revenge" Can anyone please show How or where or in what manner did He get revenge or Justice aginst this evil nasty loathsome sociopath of a wife?

Sure he sues his wife's company and Mancini is fired and so is Betty but come on... we all know that Betty would fuck a horse (and probably has). Does anyone doubt that given the way Betty was developed in this story she would of fucked some one else if Not Mancini and his clients? How does Betty suffer? she had a hsuband who would lick the shit out of her ass and tell her its gold... fuck lots of wealthy men and made huge amounts of money. Where is the down side? How is Betty suffering?

ill and has no morals or ethics. She is but a very tastelells whore. She ruins a man she professes to love for a man who hired her from college and used her as a whore. Gratefully you did not let her have children, a very good thing such pathetic genes are not carried on in the gene pool. The husband was a fool but then you needed to paint him that way. A fitting end that the whoremaster got ruined, his business after all was prostitution nothing else. The CEO was an ass who sold out to people who provided him what he could have easily gotten on his own with money, girls who throw themselves at him. You painted the husband as slow witted and gullible, yes some may be, but a successful man knows when to look and how or he would not be successful. The wife was nothing more than trash. She shit in her own house and then though she smelled wonderful. To many women think with their vaginas, and so self centered and self gratifying. At least your story may make some men think about their wives who are to much in lust with their wives. Your writing was very good, your male character was very poor. The ending was fitting for the slut and her fellows.

At the end of chapter 5 JULES overheard that awful phone conversation that for most men given ALL of the other events/ evidence would trigger a reaction. What does JUlES do? He fucks Betty... and sits on THAT conversation for another 5 or 6 months.... never asking BETYY abut it or what ot meant.

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since the event where JULES beats up a whore several months seems to have past.... Chapter 6 opens its MAY

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Going into Chapter 6 here is all the OTHER EVIDENCE that JULES decides not to think about until MAY

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Chapter 1

<b>Paul tells JULES that he had seen Betty at the local Hilton, French kissing her boss over dinner. Then they'd had coffee and hit the elevators...<i>" his hand on her ass".</i> They were still at the Hilton two hours later. </b> They had not yet returned by then.

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is this Normal wife behavior?

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.....<i>Betty hasn't given me a blowjob since more than half a year. She says tasting cock suddenly started making her nauseous...."</i>

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CHAPTER 2

JULES:....<i> "I guess he got the idea when he saw you and Robert at the Hilton, a few days back," I said. "He didn't want to disturb the two of you. You seemed rather, eh, busy." </i>

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her response.... <b>"Honey," she said. "Will you please get the pepper from the other table?"</b>

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when JULES meets PAUL a 2nd time at Pauls'place JULES says "I...I need no proof. I won't confront her.

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when JULES asks his wife do WE have a problem... BETTY says <i>"Are you leaving me, Jules? Is that what you say? Say it isn't so! Please, please hold me and say it isn't so. I'll die when you leave me." </i>

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JULES "Why would I leave you, honey? Would I have a reason?".... even someone as stupid as JULES says ...

<b>"And once more I had found nothing"</b>

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CHAPTER 3

wife gives him head for the 1st time since the 1st year they were married and swallows.... JULES speculates

..." Was it to cover up her infidelity? She never answered the question..."

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CONCERT TICKETS

JULES calls his wife's secty ....The girl said she was not to be disturbed... and that she wasnt at the office and was with Lunch with a client and Mr Mancini was not in either.

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AT the Hilton

...<b><i>"I saw Betty rise to tiptoes and whisper something in his ear. Her hand cupped his chin. They both laughed. It was nothing, really. To me it was everything......"</i> </b> After he makes an appearance at the Hilton JULES sneaks back in and sees <b>" Robert's hand was on Betty's".....</b> is this Normal wife behavior?

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then Notices there is NO CLIENT?

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Then at Home ...."he asks about the client ... BETTY says they left before lunch.... <b>JULES thinks to himself but never says (another GAY man trait) "Why had the reservation card already been on the intimate table-for-two an hour before they knew they would eat without the client?..."</b>

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...<i>"Around 4.45 p.m. she called that she'd have to work late. I should not stay up, it would be very late and there was even the possibility she'd have to spend the night at the hotel where they would be meeting their client...". <b></i> She hangs up before she tells him where she is staying...

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is this Normal wife behavior? </b>

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JULES...." <i> I knew this was a first. Of course she'd had overnight stays when she was out of town. But I had the strong impression this would be in New York. This morning she hadn't known about it. Or at least hadn't told me. She always knew quite a bit in advance when she'd be traveling and staying the night...."</i>

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CHAPTER 4

JULES rips up a lot of her clothing and destroys all the China... something most heterosexual men usually do

(sarcasm)

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JULES finds out BETTY stayed at the Marriott Marquis at Times Square in NYC ... which is where JULES and BETYY live (NYC). <b>Why does she have to stay in over night in a huge hotel where Manici has a room / suite ... where did BETTY sleep?</b>

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Big confrontation scene.... BETTY admits to being at the Marrior in Times Square ....<i>" Yes, I was at the Marriott. Robert rented a suite for a client and a conference room annex suite for us to do our presentation. </i> BETTY she says went to sleep at 1am "ALONE"...

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<b> WHERE IS THE HOTEL BILL???? </b> even when business pick up the Tab you still get a receipt for tax purposes or reimbursement

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JULES the Gay man never asks abour this...

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"You know, Betty. I wasn't in the Hilton restaurant by accident. Remember, during that lunchtime? I had been waiting for you. It was a shot in the blind. I had already given up when you arrived with Robert to sit at a small table. You know, it had already been reserved for two since over an hour. You were there with clients, as you had told me. I asked you that night, but I ask you again, Betty. Were there clients at all that day? </I>

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Her answer... <b>for the 4th time a non answer to a direct question</b>.... <i>" I love you, Jules. I goddamn love you! But how can I love you and feel loved if you don't believe me? You asked me this. You ask me again. And you asked me about the damn whores. It Wasn't Me, Jules!!"

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even JULES sees it... "Once more she had not answered my question"

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CHAPTER 5

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..."He started to read a hand-written cell-phone number at the back of Mancini's card. It was Betty's. I took the card and stared at it. It seemed to be in her handwriting too...." </i>

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"Goddammit, Paul. That is Betty's. What the fuck is going on?" ..... <b>note How JULES never asks about the card....</b>

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....<i>"No, damn it. You know I won't! (...) We have an agreement on that, I won't do it (...) I see your problem, darling (...) My problem too? Okay, my problem too, but I won't, you hear? (...) Get someone else (...) Yes (...) Fuck you too."... </i>

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now its several months later... JULES has all this actual phsyical evidence for 5 or 6 months and he stiull doesnt getr around to asking any questions....

that one of the things this author has done in a few occasions is: she writes about the protagonist male like an total moron; have him such the wife who had just been served as some deposit bin for many males, and have the idiot of a husband say to himself, "Hmmm, she so wet for me!".... and, then, of course, the AUTHOR, at the end, after having the guy gone through so much humiliation, would do as she did here: ....... she did an epilogue type ending, with the guy pumping his chest, "And I finally got that bitch. I sued her, her company, her mom and dad, and everyone she has kissed and lied to me! They are all crawling on their knees, begging me not to go through with my letigation. Ha, I will show them who's the smarter, me or them!"....... This author likes to do that. LOL!!!

This part was full of beautiful imagery, more than other parts, and clearly shows the writing skill of the author. Jules the hero is finally doing something but it's really too little too late. If Betty knew it would hurt Jules for him to know of her infidelities, and she really loved him, then why do the cuckolding at all? Why didn't she quit her job and find one that does not put her into that position? The answer is she loves the illicit sex, the pleasure of it, the secrecy and naughtiness of it, the variety, the feeling she is doing something to help both herself and her company, the fantasy -- need I go on? It is really hard to imagine someone doing these things and truly loving another to whom they promised to be faithful (in wedding vows). She resisted this lifestyle for one year but finally had to revert to nymphomania. It seems to me that anyone who has a sexual addiction would try to get help (therapy). Or if the person wants that lifestyle (and I'm amazed Jules never got venereal warts or some other common STD with all the bareback goings on between his wife and the rest of the world), then why be married? What security did this woman need? She had plenty of money, plenty of companionship, plenty of sex, lots of buddies, excitement, travel, whatever. Her delusion that Jules was her only "true" love is very sad; maybe there are people in this world like that. I can appreciate that Jules is a sensitive, romantic, and caring person who hurt very badly but honestly, he's still got the wimp gene controlling his behavior. Going to court may make him feel better but it also drags out the entire business. Sometimes it's best to put things behind you and get on with your life. He's not the first nor the last to be betrayed by a spouse. Now for the next story we can have the betrayed spouse agree to reconciliation provided the cheater wears a high-quality chastity belt and is put on strict rationing of sexual release . . . now that would be revenge!

I cannot say I am wild about the story really, but you are an excellent writer. Your imagery is excellent, but I do wish your dialogue were a bit more focused. The man is a weak one, and the woman is dillusional. Yet, you wove it in an interesting way.

I hope you keep writing and posting your stories here.

sissyboy for your male lead in your story.take the money and fuck them.now if they are broke,you get nothing.justice is better payback,then revenge.her boss would've been my target and would've hurt him bad.your writing was great,but you don't understand men.

Just empty prose... Nor the story, nor the characters have any merit. I consider it author indulgence when words are strung together because oh, they sound so pretty... Where's my meat and potatoes? I prefer a solid story with fleshed out characters that make sense and a plot to go with it. As it is, our hero is a homosexual who loves his angst and instrospection, and the plot is too ridiculously far-fetched.

I never thought of that first time. I saw Amsterdam and Belgium and assumed you were Flemish. Anyway, your English writing is superb. I wish I had the command of other languages that you display. You bring to your stories the perspective of your personal and cultural experiences. It is interesting that you try to portray a male point of view. I also like the way you made your protagonist grow from the time when he assaulted the French Canadian girl, whom he thought to be his wife, to the point where he sought a more complete revenge. Whilst he may at this point feel dissatisfied, he has achived some closure and can now move on with his life hopefully fulfilling his revenge by gaining happiness. Disregard the ranting and continue writing your stories There is a delicacy in your style that sets it apart. Your shading and nuances are exquisite. Perhaps this is due to thinking in your native language but writing in English. I think that is why some of the greatest writers in the English language are Irish, Scots, and Welsh. Keep it up. Personally, I'd torch the bitch.

Your writing continues to be so impressive. My only criticism is your use of the lawsuit in seeking revenge on the two men. That loss of affection horse poop has been used in just about every revenge story written on this site. You had been so deliciously creative in every other aspect of the story that it seemed like you were up late finishing this and just wanted to get to bed so you threw in the lawsuit to get it done. Your talent and this story deserved better.

Still the rest of the this short jaunt was so good it deserved to be put into a novella. That way you could have drawn out this great read and not had to rush so many explanations. You may want to consider it.

Also, please don't pay attention to the naysayers. Your story was great. I believe that by reading some of their comments I can see why they think the way they do. It seems that they need to have a winner and a loser in every relationship. It exposes their naivete with regards to relationships. Maybe they have just been burned by so many women. Of course, in a successful relationship everybody wins but when things don't work out there really are no winners and you showed that in this story.

This is close to being a top drawer story... Too many gaps and lack of continuity...I do HOPE you addrsss the issues raised by others leaving comments... Please Make it soon and NOT later...

Your writing is good but the story line is lacking any integrity. Believability has to be there for even fiction to work.

Keep writing

PT

made tons of money as a whore. This started before she knew him and went right up to the day they married. So in effect she was cheating on him before they married. her boss was a big man who made her feel like a woman, so what did huby make her feel like, cottage cheese. She put her foot down and was faithful for a year, then it was THE OLD EXCUSE I DID IT FOR THE COMPANY. She had to be making whores wages so where did she hide her money. When he finally had all the evidence right in front of him so he couldnt wimp out any more, he finally took revenge. So she didnt want to hurt him she should have broken it off a long time before the day of the wedding, but even so if she quit she should never have started back, but she did so he then should have taken half of everything she had made years of being a whore she would have had thousands of dollars ..when he took down her boss and h lost his job and the business was going in the tubes. dont you think the business would have sued her boss also ....jules was right to take down mancini and his company also ...he turned down 6 million to do that but with the business they had and their ownings he would still have probably gotten more than that in holdings. He at the end does get Judy and him and Paul are friends again.I still think he should have teken Betty for more. But I guess when you get millions in settlement anyway what is the few hundred thousand she might have had ...well the satisfaction of breaking her amyway and the ntelling her this is for not sucking my cock ...this is for coming to me with the stink of others on you...this is for taking the chance of giving me how many diseases ...he should have not just taken her employment from her and broke the company he should have broken her also ...let her know there is no chance in hell of her ever coming back to him as anything except a fuck if him and judy dont work out ...he could then pay her for a fuck as what she is just a WHORE

You have to write her side of the story, before and after the he discover that truth.What she was thinking? and does she expect a reconciliation,and her reaction after that revenge of her ex-husband.

it has its ups and downs, but the story ends up like i thought it should be.

you are one of the better writers in this site. keep it up. and thanks for posting your stories. i would love to read a romantic story from you.

“Author indulgence when words are strung together” is the quote from the poster which conveys my exact sentiment. I would have called it: Wasteland of style. ***********************************************************

Style which serves no meaning and function is no beauty to me. It’s kitsch. Like heavy decorations over a piece of furniture which as such can’t serve it’s function anymore. I never liked films which filled plot holes with beautiful photography of long “meaningful (looking)” gazes into urban/rural landscape. This is the equivalent of the painter/ the author patronizing us with EMPTY FORM. ***********************************************************

What do we know about the emotional/ psychological set up of either husband or wife? Close to nothing. We have fragmented shallow dialogs. A lot of impulsive libidinal Narcissistic behaviors but no real window into their thinking, no real window into the way they talk to each other, communicate negotiate. Or else it’s another ‘global warning’ for why people SHOULD have more communication? Six full chapters for a warning.

Are you forcing yourself into the first row of a shameful gallery of some sort of mindless thought police? Are you trying to shame me and like mind people to silence by preposterous speculations on peoples’ personal biography, like the number of women they were burned by? How would you feel if demagogs started to speculate on what in your personal life might have made you attracted to the kind of characters as in this story? Can’t you see that by writing Ad hominem attacks you in fact JOIN THE CAMP that you seem to condemn? *******************************************************

As to your bad advice (IMO) not listen to “nay sayers”, and despite of your rude attack, I will wish you well, and say: in what ever you do I wish you the wisdom and courage to listen FIRST to the ”nay sayers” because they care enough to tell you what they really think should be improved, then it’s up to you to take action and improve. Of course I would never create a category called: “nay sayers”. Maybe I would correct it to 1. Always listen to EVERY feedback because there is much to be learned from each if listened carefully 2, Pay special attention to the reasoning and to examples. in other words to any kind of substance (regardless if it’s “nay” or “yea”)

the ending,but would have liked it more if Betty had been punished.Now finish 'Delicate Balance' please.

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<quote>Just empty prose...</quote>

<p>Anonymous In Tex has it right. This writer is in love with words and uses far too many of them. She never uses one word if ten will do. The result is all the flowery, pretentious phrases get in the way of the story instead of enhancing it. Perhaps she doesn't see her job as storytelling. Perhaps she sees it as filling up as many pages as she can?</p>

<p>Ron123XYZ@foreveranonymous.naturally

Where's all the luv my man? I mean what makes you think I was referring to you? As those famous songwriters have penned "paranoia will destroy ya".

You went off on quite the little soliloquy there big fella. First off I would be horrified if one of those demagogs you so eloquently described started speculating on things in my life, mostly because I am not really sure what one of those is and they could be painful. Yet if it was just a demagogue I'd be okay with it because it happens here all the time. In fact it seems to be part of the game with many of the commentators.

As for my "attacks", I'm not sure what you meant. Can't a guy give a pretty woman like Angiquesophie some advice? Again, are you sure you're not a little paranoid here? I mean you hadn't even left a comment on this chapter prior to my previous comment. You wouldn't consider yourself a target because you are a career "naysayer" would you? To paraphrase a famous and appropriate quote from the hallmark of all movies, Animal House; paranoid, negative and crazy is no way to go through life young man.

In all seriousness Kolkore, I wasn't referring to your critical comments. People who try and help the writers on this site by pointing out what they consider a mistake and weighing in with their opinions are the reason we write here. The animals I refer to leave insults and threats that would get them thrown in jail if they were uttered in a public forum where the assailant could be recognized. Your comments although many times a bit pompous and long winded are often attempts to point out your point of view and any percieved errors on the authors part and they are appreciated I am sure.

There I even managed to critique your comments with my statement here. And note Kolkore although I was possibly a "naysayer" with regards to my critique of your commenting of other stories, I hope you follow your own advice and have the courage and wisdom to listen because it is up to you to take action and improve.

I enjoyed your story, waiting for each new chapter to be posted. I won't comment on your writing skills as others have as I am not a writer ( I wish I was as I have many stories to tell ). I just enjoyed your tale, and I think that is what matters to a reader.

Thanks for a great series of stories!

I thought the celebral description of the husbands attempts at enduring were in keeping with the story title. I was glad he quit trying to turn a blind eye to his friends concerns. The fact that his wife was a prostitute must've been horrifying and devastating. I was disappointed that he didn't smack her around when he found out. Her pimp (Mancini)wouldn't have hesitated to do that. Presumably, after he gets his money from Mancini and Huntington, he'll educate them as to the consequences of looking at another man's wife.

He was correct to not respond to the wife's communication attempts. She cheated-therefore she did NOT love him at all. Period. It's amazing that she didn't give him AIDS or something. He's better off leaving her in the garbage.

I wish the ending had been a little succinct. I would think most guys would have little problem getting over a whore. He came out ahead with the Doc & there's no shortage of good women if the Doc work out.

I was well aware that you could have not referred your comments personally to me, and indeed I never said it. Still, I decided as I do occasionally when the tone of the comments is starting to go south, and for the sake of netiquette preservation, that an alert was due. *****************************************

After all, you did allude to people’s personal background with their personal history with women. I call that Ad hominem. And even if others did write viscously do we go there too? In that respect at least I was not paranoid. But you did attack other people personally. Do I have to wait until something is only touching me? If something is not right and I care about it and I feel that the person I am writing to could hear me I would right about it. *****************************************

As far as my style you may be right. I do tend to be very passionate (that’s how it feels to me when I write). I can see how it could come across to someone who does not like what he is hearing as pompous. Toning down my style is always something that I have to work on (how about that for responsiveness?

angiquesophie: Nicely done! For me your prose was far from empty. To me you creatively described the husband's emotional skirmishes with his love combating his doubts. I enjoyed your story, but even much more, I relished your presentation. For me perhaps 'torchthebitch's' description best describes your writing:"...a delicacy in your style...shading and nuances are exquisite." Thank you for allowing me accompany you on this journey.

Thank you for a good, well written, story. I really like your style and feminine elegance and I look forward to your next story. --------May I use your comment section to address the commentators who insist on carrying on their egotistic, self-justification, point-scoring statements with multiply comments----I would like to remind them that any person, who is registered, should be able to be reached through their contact page. Please avoid misusing and abusing authors/writers by writing to your antagonist directly.

1. It's the prerogative of the author to remove messages *************************************

2. My vision of the public board is that of mutual multi faceted true OPEN PUBLIC boards with no engineering hand. *************************************

3. My personal rational this time for the additional posting was totally selfless. It was all about trying to protect people from unfair personal attacks on their person rather than on their opinions. ************************************

4. Each of my follow up comments is scored 100 to encourage not punish the hosting author to further allow open exchanges and civil debates which you seem to loath.

(I would have responded to you personally if you were not Anon)

There are many of us that write stories for lit. This lady has the ability to make most of the rest of us look kinda weak with our efforts. I'm very impressed with the ability angiquesophie possesses to make us feel the emotions and even see the colors. This girl is good.

After re-reading your whole story I needed time to get back on earth. This is much more than fashion, dear designer. Your story has all: Emotions from shallow to bottomless! Colours from pastel to glowing! Sounds from soft to ear-splitting! Your words were images to look at, music to hear, fragrance to smell and reality to touch. It was like sailing in a never ending, always changing, fresh breeze. --- Thank you for the good time - your story is the best I've ever read on LIT. And please don't get annoyed by some comments of "stupid white men". Me, I'am looking forward to your next "chef d'oeuvre".... --- Bavarian

Loved the series. I wanted to find out the resolution and yet not have it end. What a contradiction! You've done your job as a writer to get that response. Thanks for presenting a different viewpoint. I always enjoy learning about the way people think in other places in the world. It's so refreshing. Phil

I loved the mystery and intrigue of this story! At first you want to believe that it is some great misunderstanding especially given Betty's denials and her reactions to his questions. Even after the discovery of the lookalike hooker there were unanswered questions. Like why would her cell number written in her handwriting be on a card in the possession of the hooker? _______________________________

Thanks for a creative and imaginative story!____________

SleeplessinMD

This story had it all. To call the wife a cheating bitch would be an under statement. The story had me from the beginning.

I liked the story and can sort of see the point of the husband, blinded by love is something we have all heard of. Since love is a feeling I guess it can make logic and common sense take a back seat in that regard.

Now in this last chapter with her letter I started to think about her logic and I just laughed when I thought of a fitting remark about something similar. In the movie "As Good as it gets" Jack Nicholson character (who's a writer) is asked how he manages to portray women so accurately in his books, his answer is really good "I think of a man, and I take away reason and accountability". That pretty much sums this woman up. I was hoping for a longer ending but this works to in a downer way, him still being heartbroken.

Great Story, loved all of it.

when a female writer talk for a man its'hard.first a woman isn't a man and don't reason like a man.so some of your thinking don't add up,but good story.

Had he really wanted to hurt her he could have very easily and ended his pain. All he had to do was call 911 and announce he was committing suicide and was leaving the front door unlocked. Then carefully placing her letter next to him, blown his head off. She could have then lived with the fact the man she so "loved" (make that hated, she after all was just a whore having sex for money) died because of her acts of unethical immoral acts. That would be revenge especially if he had faxed a copy of the letter with his letter head to the newspaper beforehand. Little one you have real trouble giving things a male perspective and your female perspective is so skewed that it hardly represents most faithful and loving spouses. Please dont try to speak for the general female population any longer. They say married women commit adultry at rate of about 30%. If that is so, then your stories could represent about say 15% of the married female population at best.

I'm rather partial to your writing. This story made my heart ache, he needed so desperately to believe her.Your style of writing is very near poems or haiku's to my mind, and this one moved me verily... You are definitely one of the best writers I've read in a long time girl, and remember, my reading habits are extensive.. But please sweet lady, can't you allow for a happy one too :) I sorely miss that... take care now Yoron

fantastic!! "nuff said.

defective being used as a whore by a man who manipulates her. And the man who loves her was destroyed by her mindless actions based on money and impressing a man she should have sued for harassment.

Most of this story I find to interwoven to be enjoyable. The only really good part was the suing of both men despise the offers to buy him off. The whore is just plain really ignorant trash. Nothing more than a sex worker employed by a company. Her ability to think never really mattered to any of the people concerned with her except by the man who loved her. The man she destroyed in her thoughtless acts. This little company whore was one of the worst kinds of trash. He needs months of medical testing just to verify he is not infected with something brought into the home by her. Of course she can always move to Amsterdam into the red light district and pursue her career.

It was very good and something that happen everyday in workplaces.

Let the women haters froth, but the description of the man so thoroughly loving his wife that he can't bear to believe anything bad about her was okay by me. I wish that the reason for Paul's antipathy had been explained. The grammar and editing were also good. Too many LW authors struggle with proper grammar or don't know the difference anyway. It makes a big difference to me when reading a story.

Norcal makes the point about how this author shows a man so in love with his wife that he cannot come to grasp what what is happening.

OK.... that is a fair assessment of this story. But for 6-7 Months?

I hate agreeing with a cretin like HIV but here he has a point. The telltale signs are ignored for months even as MORE of them occur every few weeks.

Its too much of a stretch. Sure one unexplained incident where the husband forgets to ask about is OK.... but not for 7 months and not with all this new crap happening.

maybe there is reason WHY for 7 months the husband lives in denial but since the author never develops that side of his character we cant go there.

The story begins in May, Betty is found out in September, when the leaves start turning in New England. So in my counting it took Jules about 4 months to find out. Not overly long, considering the "false alarms" he encountered. Harry in Virginia started to somehow juggle with the numbers. I don't think it is in the story.

Thank you all for reading and commenting.

angiuesophie ...in my 1st post about this story what I said was this

JULES has all this actual phsyical evidence for 5 or 6 months and he stiull doesnt get around to asking any questions..

you say MAY to SEPT.... 4 months.

OK... its your story.

However this is the way MY calendar works... MAY JUNE JULY AUG SEPT--- 5 months. I saw thew anonymous dickwad above who said it was 7 . He is waaaaay wrong.

It was NOT 7. Just saying....

I'm amazed at your talent. And if you REALLY are a 29 year old Belgian girl, then I am truely amazed. I would have guessed this story was written by a 35-50 year old American man. Whatever, but please don't listen to negative comments, and keep posting. I'd like to know where your other stories are posted (the ones they wouldn't post here). Thanks.

I just re-read this story and it grabbed me again. Very powerfull writing. Thanks

The story is a roller coaster ride, and emotionally draining, but I couldn't put it down. I love your use of language. Tiny descriptions become almost poetic phrases. Still working my way through your long list of contributions here.

I enjoy your style of writing and your use of words. Very different from most here and entertaining as well. Excellent!

There was never any doubt! (Of course, being in the LW section of LIT helped a LOT!) Despite the twists and turns (the red-head was a tough one!), it was clear that she was totally convinced that whatever else she might be doing, Sweetie sincerely believed she was being a TLW for Hubby! Great writing, excellent flow!

5*

I'm in awe of your creative skills, thank you for this and all the rest of your work.

This truly is one of my favorites on this site and once again I am reminded of just how talented a writer you are. This is truly a work of art. Five stars.

The sadness builds with each paragraph. At the end you hope she just curls up and dies for destroying this jewel of a relationship.

This is up there with the best on Literotica. For non French speakers, there is a bit too much so that it becomes distracting.

Thankyou, keep up the good work.

Even though I initial figured she was a cheat, you did a phenomenal job of throwing the reader off that track. I was shocked. Five stars. One of the best.

Please, please Retardique, don't try to write from the male perspective.

it has been some time that i read ya stuff but decided to read some again. still think u need to do ya stuff from female sights.

How do i say this. You have a nice easy way of writing, I really like it. The titles seemed off but u still got my 5ssss......bill

I skipped some of your stories because the titles and decrips were odd, they didn't catch my attention....lol

I'll go back and read them all now....lol again

Harrion has it spot on

Everything you write is meant to destroy a weak man who can't see what is in front of his eyes.

You even have him beaten (other story) for absolutely no furtherance of anything to do with the story other than to make sure a man suffers even more.

I say it again, you have got to be a man hating cunt or a hillary and obama voter.. or both

Get over yourself. Claiming someone is a sterotype simply opens yourself up to being painted by a similar cloth.

For Example.

" Wow, with all that vitriolic hatred and the inability to see beyond your own issues you must be a Trump Supporter. "

Wasn't that fun?

I really enjoyed the story, well written with lush details. The plot turns so guietle you need to pay attention

Chille y

HaHa

This has to be the best comment I have read that has nothing to do with the story.

"I say it again, you have got to be a man hating cunt or a hillary and obama voter.. or both"

As funny as it is, I wonder if you are not right.

I love that. There is another saying that someone has, I can't remember who.

"dumber than a sack of Hillarys"

I LMFAO at that. Maybe should also be "as corrupt as a box of Obamas"

As creepy as a pile of Donalds

I like your writing style. I can certainly believe you are probably a woman and I therefore am very interested as you are one of the few writing in this genre I am personally most interested in - loving wives/unfaithful wives.

His wife's business was basically as a very high priced whore - undoubtedly making thousands of dollars (or more) for every "trick" she turned - since the payments were hidden and excused as merely legitimate PR contracts/work payments.

And she really did "deny" her husband all kinds of things, including just being gone away from him many nights in NYC when she really didn't have to be and also denied him the truth of how she was so "successful."

And she knew what she was doing was ultimately wrong because she tried to keep it all secret. Her rationalization was "I didn't want to hurt you" but the truth was she didn't want to inconvenience herself - classic cake-eating. I didn't quite get why she stopped blowing her husband. Presumably as a whore she did that and everything else with her clients.

I can see her slipping into outright high-class prostitution very easily if no more "good" PR jobs came her way.

While reading this I was reminded of a mainstream Hollywood movie "loving wives" plot with Ben Affleck called "Man About Town". He was a partner in a Hollywood Agency specializing in representing "writers" predominately. They would do a LOT to sign new hot "talent" but didn't utilize prostitution...except that Ben's wife ended up sleeping with one of their hottest writer/directors. Pretty good honest treatment for Hollywood. Of course, being Hollywood the resolution there WAS a RAAC rather than total BTB.

This piece is very well written and utterly thought-provoking. For me personally it has a haunting quality which makes is hard to forget.

This is why friends are reluctant to get in the middle of things. The only unsatisfying part, was she didn't stop after he got suspicious. She was portrayed as smarter than that. Betty had dodged a bullet, then walked right back into the line of fire.

Jules is a weak man, not very likeable and also ignorant. He is a true bitch and a bitch, of any gender, will always be pissed on in this life, they will be humiliated and degraded, they will be spit on and shat on and the funny thing is the bitch will continue to ask for more, the bitch will beg for more shit to eat. Its just life on Planet Earth. Its just the way it is and we all have to accept it as a fact of life.

Betty has a bitch for a husband, and she treats him like what he is. How can any woman love, respect or admire a bitch husband... Not really possible. Betty does seem a little ignorant too, so their ignorance was a good match. Now they are divorced, they are both young and better off without each other and they may both end up happy. The love between them presented in the story is not realistic - at least not love in both directions which the writer does touch on towards the end. Good story from a good writer.

It would be good for Betty to have written her downfall after she was kicked out, to after the court case and to see if she understood why her actions were so destructive.

A follow up from Betty would be good. 5* story - excellent writer

But because you are, those among us who experienced betrayal—especially betrayal after betrayal after betrayal—reëxperience every single instance. It isn't cathartic, it's punishment for being so blind and ignorant.

This was a good story, until the end.

It should have ended with him leaving her.

The Revenge was cliche and made him seem petty.

Her lose of the marage and what she considered to be love was payment enough.

The attack on the corporations totally not needed.

As Kenda says "trust no one."

You are easily one of my favorite writers here, great story!

Who is “She”? Betty? Did he get back with Betty? Or is this the “sweet little doctor”? Or someone else? The French-Canadian prostitute?

I’m confused.

Loses credibility about the 4th chapter another garbage tale.

As always a wonderfull story delivered by the author. Great closure.

This guy and most of your male characters are insufferable. Truly. Just pathetic people.

Loved it, great ending to a wonderfull story.

your are one pathy writer...rambling around the trees..never getting to the point..and all this to only end in a unended sorta manner....if you really like to mentally go on wild journeys through the solar cuck system...if thats what floats ur boat..please go...but dont take us with u...

The story was over-written and verbose in the beginning, yet the ending was quite unsatisfyingly abrupt.

You are not the only writer... it seems when the cuckold calls his wife on her cell half a dozen times or more and she never answers or even calls back later he never asks why or calls her out on it... I would absolutely insist on an explanation... that is the most disrespectful behavior a person can display... there is no excuse for it, yet all these writers write in this type of behavior and make the victim so incompetent he never questions it... he never insists on an explanation and it should be an indication "that something that ain't right!"

What a dragged on waste of time

I guess that one lesson from this is that as the female is wrapping the male in a cocoon she is wrapping herself into two cocoons: one with the male and another separate and all her own. Inside her very own cocoon she honestly believes that she is getting away with it.

Gee, I wonder if the same can be said of the authoress and her reader?

LWlurker

Well... as long as the cocoons produce gorgeous butterflies?

How is Is taking legal action in the form of a lawsuit against the company revenge against the wife who has committed heinous amounts of emotional psychological and physical betrayal on the hus

even worse How does this particular author not see that suing the company which is perfectly satisfactory has nothing to do with getting revenge on the wife?

1 star - it was just too difficult to follow, so I just skipped to the end and saw why down below.

Judy or his Dr. the shrink?

Nice, well worth a 5.

See...a man would have skipped all of rhe parts of this series that were filled with the emotional angst...and simply made a plan with his best friend to go and get the evidence.

It would have happened on her next trip. They would have found someone to do it. Or done it themselves. And got photographic and video evidence of it.

It wouldn't have taken months. Or the better part of a year. But he'd have known within weeks and have proved it was her or that she was not fucking her boss and clients.

And it would have been one 4 page story. Two guys. Friends for 20 years. One finds his buddy's wife is cheating. And they make a plan for the next trip she takes out of town to get the evidence.

They find she IS the company whore. Selling herself for money.

What I find strange is in this authors really fucked up worlds that she constructs like this one...where are the unwanted pregnancies? Or STDs? This slut fucks around for days every time she leaves the NYC area...in a sex and alcohol filled daze and never makes a mistake with her birth control? Or never catches the clap?

Right.

Not to mention the delusions of this wife character. "Can't you see I fucked all those men for us honey?!"

Uhhh...wow.

Congratulations dear author, you have taken this vat of mysterious marital status bouillabaisse and simmered it throughout this series. The main ingredients were doubt, indecision and hope springing eternal, with a healthy sprinkling of denial and a soupçon of impotent rage. Add many trips to the never-ending waffle bar and dear readers, we had a feast.

The denouement was bittersweet. I could feel Jules’ heartache as he read the letter Betty wrote to him, and I was uplifted when his friend and assistant encouraged him to barf and rally.

Betty’s version of love was a new facet in that gem for me. That woman had more compartments in her psyche than a pigeon coop. She was most likely, in my opinion, simply:

Insane in the membrane, insane in the brain! — The Beasty Boys