by gradprof
Out freaking standing is the first word that comes to mind. I enjoyed all the aspects of the Prof. Matthews perverted thoughts. I will vote for this story for the halloween contest, and I encourage everyone else to do the same.
Fantastic Job. Definitely gets my vote for the Halloween Contest. Not only incredibly hot, but intelligent too. Where else on this site are you going to see the word sanctimonious?
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Hot, smart, a decent plot. Loved it.
Great story. That was a lot of fun, believable and well written.
Gradprof, your work is always superb. Keep it coming.
And never mind the ignorant comment below by someone who isn't brave enough to own his criticisms of a talented author's work.
Great stuff! But it's just screaming for a sequel. You've gotta get him with Lindsay. A power stuggle between the ice princess prof with the tenured position and Lindsay as prizes to be won. And of course, lots of hot sex has to ensue, including some threesomes. :)
Your writing made me feel like a horny prof and to see him get what he really wanted in the end is great. Wonderful story.
The opening seemed stiff and awkward in subtle ways (like trying to instantly prove your degree of intelligence with specific word choices), but this story ramped up quickly and caught fire. The emotions were almost completely believable (as if you were writing from personal experience, heh, so were you?), even though they were larger-than-life in their intensity (though personally, I dislike the stereotypical male "I can't control my own dick" and would have found clearer emotional justifications, but that also does not detract from the clear 5-vote). I almost picked up the scent of that icy bitch as she fought to keep her past from ruining her future. Well penned.
Such a mean, spiteful, dirty slut deserves to have her ass reamed with professorial cock. I do believe Lindsay needs to be taught a thing or two about sloppy seconds and how the professor does not accept such impertinence from his students.
As a fellow asshole with a taste for vengeance, I just cannot see sacrificing an opportunity to ruin a malicious, condescending, eat-or-be-eaten torpedo queen with sights set clearly on your own advancement for a momentary ass fuck. On Monday morning, she will probably file sexual harassment charges against you regardless. Send the e-mails and destroy the bitch.
Not a sexy premise, granted, but sexual encounters aren't the ultimate payoff of every situation, are they?
Great writing, great plot, great characters - both narrator, Lynn and Lindsay -
great rough sex. The story absolutely cries out for a follow-up where the plot thickens, poor Lindsay is caught in the middle and the three get in even deeper (some D/s and perhaps a little bdsm would be in order).
Your story was amazing! i definately need to check out more of your work!
Wow. Excellent characters and descriptions. Interesting surprise at the end when she said there'd be more. As others have mentioned, this begs for a sequel. Preferably something humiliating for Lynn. Nicely done!
you know, I loved you & Jessica, but all of that intensity in 1/8 of a 3-part story? amazing writing -- thanks -- I would never want to meet Lynn, but Jessica!!
Best would be if he sent the photo anyway. Maybe he could publish it on the internet. He may have been at the party but hadn't done anything improper - or hadn't yet which is what counts. Send the photo to the dean, university president, Lyndsey's parents, trustees and then post it on the internet.